tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post1564399546599223337..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Special #28, Onitsura's Cherry-FlowersUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-5662238634580628772013-04-05T05:38:22.582+02:002013-04-05T05:38:22.582+02:00I tried to leave Yepirategunn a comment...maybe I ...I tried to leave Yepirategunn a comment...maybe I can post it here...I tried newer posts that I thought the comments were still open, but cypber space was not cooperative tonite.<br />For the post yepirategunn had two exceptional haiku in my thinking:<br /><br />Onitsura’s Cherry Flowers<br />buds are on the pussy willows<br />no blossoms just snow<br />we wait, and…<br /><br />And a second one, similar in concept<br /><br />icicles melt above me<br />I watch but don’t know<br />which one will fall<br /><br />Original thoughts and well stated. <br />Thank you yepirategunn<br />Peace<br />Siggi <br />Siggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-91241033216815324072013-04-05T05:00:50.996+02:002013-04-05T05:00:50.996+02:00Love this prompt...and thank you for the reminder ...Love this prompt...and thank you for the reminder of the troiku...<br />Peace<br />SiggiSiggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-26783868981270580042013-03-24T11:15:39.358+01:002013-03-24T11:15:39.358+01:00I second that!I second that!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00872129157580383933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-65063790369967245242013-03-24T11:15:24.307+01:002013-03-24T11:15:24.307+01:00this was an amazing prompt! very inspiring!this was an amazing prompt! very inspiring!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00872129157580383933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-87516701003697545452013-03-24T10:12:15.553+01:002013-03-24T10:12:15.553+01:00Thank you for introducing the troiku to me in such...Thank you for introducing the troiku to me in such a wonderful way Kristjaan.<br />I shall try one out in future.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-29105580080399956342013-03-24T05:16:28.578+01:002013-03-24T05:16:28.578+01:00I love your prompt today, thoroughly enjoyed it. B...I love your prompt today, thoroughly enjoyed it. But I would like you to write at length on Troiku, I am intrigued by this new form. Thank you so much, Kris.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-81931684860421575152013-03-24T01:17:23.246+01:002013-03-24T01:17:23.246+01:00I really like the troiku.I really like the troiku.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-38204164603672716042013-03-24T00:02:45.981+01:002013-03-24T00:02:45.981+01:00I agree with Bjørn (Brudberg). My immediate reflec...I agree with Bjørn (Brudberg). My immediate reflection was the one you formulate in the "Horse 3". This is a haiku difficult to make a new one out of. I am not sure if I can.Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-68148270831373947042013-03-23T21:28:34.457+01:002013-03-23T21:28:34.457+01:00Lovely troiku.. especially love the last one... th...Lovely troiku.. especially love the last one... the promise hidden in the end of the haiku is the cherry fruits...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-14093086022622350642013-03-23T20:39:35.143+01:002013-03-23T20:39:35.143+01:00I had to get away from cherry blossoms but I hope ...I had to get away from cherry blossoms but I hope I kept the spirit of the poet's original!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/03/23/breathless/noreply@blogger.com