tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post1998121769074164903..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem's Kasen Renga Session #1Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-3070320504848106122013-07-05T15:47:34.455+02:002013-07-05T15:47:34.455+02:0018. (7-7) Spring
newly married bride
smile spread...18. (7-7) Spring<br /><br />newly married bride<br />smile spreads on her rosy cheeks<br />her man nudges herAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-59384170472774360292013-07-03T15:07:34.254+02:002013-07-03T15:07:34.254+02:0017 (5-7-5, flower/spring)
sprouting bamboo shoots...17 (5-7-5, flower/spring)<br /><br />sprouting bamboo shoots<br />between colorful tulips -<br />I curse quietly and blush<br />Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-35237118264147750422013-07-03T15:01:39.059+02:002013-07-03T15:01:39.059+02:00Good day HA ... thank you for your participation i...Good day HA ... thank you for your participation in this kasen renga. I have deleted your other comment as you have asked.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-81111137028495747002013-07-03T14:33:52.964+02:002013-07-03T14:33:52.964+02:0016. 7-7 (Bamboo)
Kindly ignore the previous submis...16. 7-7 (Bamboo)<br />Kindly ignore the previous submission which is written in three verses of syllable counts 5-7-5..<br /><br />embracing lovers at dusk<br />shaded in a bamboo groveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-71712743651018575432013-06-29T09:34:40.989+02:002013-06-29T09:34:40.989+02:0015. 5-7-5 (Love/Flowers)
lovers of twilight
meet...15. 5-7-5 (Love/Flowers)<br /><br />lovers of twilight <br />meet in a field of flowers<br />steal a silent kissAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-29875377140638764842013-06-27T22:02:15.270+02:002013-06-27T22:02:15.270+02:0014. 7-7 (Winter)
wilting embers, winternight
join...14. 7-7 (Winter)<br /><br />wilting embers, winternight<br />join my under the duvetbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-52026981949796358052013-06-27T06:00:41.564+02:002013-06-27T06:00:41.564+02:0013 # 5-7-5 (Moon/Winter)
a clouded old moon
shive...13 # 5-7-5 (Moon/Winter)<br /><br />a clouded old moon<br />shivers in wake of cold winds<br />ache for warmth of loveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-29607996536651462802013-06-26T03:45:49.968+02:002013-06-26T03:45:49.968+02:0012 # 7-7 (Rocks/Mountains)
echoing through the si...12 # 7-7 (Rocks/Mountains)<br /><br />echoing through the silent mountains<br />the lamenting cries of seagulsChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-70534793212313484192013-06-25T20:57:49.233+02:002013-06-25T20:57:49.233+02:00Good day JzB, would you please be so kind to write...Good day JzB, would you please be so kind to write another stanza for this Renga? You've shared however a nice 10th stanza, but Nimue's stanza was published earlier. Maybe you can write the 12th stanza.<br />Thank you JzB.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-42805702196169034952013-06-25T10:25:52.961+02:002013-06-25T10:25:52.961+02:0011. 5-7-5 (Water)
her voice an echo
of the soothi...11. 5-7-5 (Water)<br /><br />her voice an echo<br />of the soothing waves that break<br />on childhood sea-shore<br />brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-39893065923882590472013-06-24T23:03:46.294+02:002013-06-24T23:03:46.294+02:00#10 7-7 (Love/ Free verse, no theme)
firefly lig...#10 7-7 (Love/ Free verse, no theme)<br /><br />firefly light attracts his mate<br />as starlight brings her to me<br /><br />Jazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-76122701896612930912013-06-24T21:19:20.753+02:002013-06-24T21:19:20.753+02:00#10 (7-7) love / free verse
her yearning for an o...#10 (7-7) love / free verse<br /><br />her yearning for an ocean,<br />his passion for her kissesPratibhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060001943746107173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-30240047357702190302013-06-24T05:55:38.004+02:002013-06-24T05:55:38.004+02:00#9 (5-7-5)love/flowers
gentle touch of lips
hands...#9 (5-7-5)love/flowers<br /><br />gentle touch of lips<br />hands embracing hands of love <br />holding an aster<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-6257363092038104222013-06-23T19:16:24.529+02:002013-06-23T19:16:24.529+02:00#8 (7_7) love
maple leaves fall in the gutter
whi...#8 (7_7) love<br /><br />maple leaves fall in the gutter<br />while kissing my wifeChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-57808266844837403982013-06-22T23:50:44.929+02:002013-06-22T23:50:44.929+02:00#7 5-7-5
single maple leaf
decorate the farmers s...#7 5-7-5<br /><br />single maple leaf<br />decorate the farmers shoes<br />after harvestingbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-75728409898969132472013-06-22T19:19:22.854+02:002013-06-22T19:19:22.854+02:005 5-7-5 Moon/Autumn
autumn's harvest moon
tr...5 5-7-5 Moon/Autumn<br /><br />autumn's harvest moon<br />trees begin to shed their leaves<br />please don't change seasonsMaggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-77069361086310838202013-06-22T19:04:51.623+02:002013-06-22T19:04:51.623+02:00Sure.Sure.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-67324762465156717012013-06-22T02:38:30.224+02:002013-06-22T02:38:30.224+02:00#6: 7-7 (autumn)
an Indian summer wind
passes ov...#6: 7-7 (autumn)<br /><br />an Indian summer wind <br />passes over pumpkin fieldsLollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-28589789366041822792013-06-22T01:48:40.487+02:002013-06-22T01:48:40.487+02:00Dear Maggie, would you like to write the fifth sta...Dear Maggie, would you like to write the fifth stanza of 5-7-5 with the theme Moon/Autumn, because Managua Gunn has already written the fourth stanza. He posted his comment earlier then you did. Thank you for your effort to write a stanza for this first Kasen Renga of Carpe Diem.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-48520633748939260222013-06-22T00:14:07.145+02:002013-06-22T00:14:07.145+02:004 7-7 (Freedom)
watching a stray strand of hair
i...4 7-7 (Freedom)<br /><br />watching a stray strand of hair<br />in the shadow on your face<br /><br />Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-78893814238826825812013-06-21T22:59:42.236+02:002013-06-21T22:59:42.236+02:007-7 (Freedom)
on the clifftops your dream flies
ha...7-7 (Freedom)<br />on the clifftops your dream flies<br />hair in the wind wild and freePirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-31126969561884692392013-06-21T19:34:31.184+02:002013-06-21T19:34:31.184+02:003 5-7-5 (Love)
moonbeams caressing
golden hair on...3 5-7-5 (Love)<br /><br />moonbeams caressing<br />golden hair on soft pillow<br />O my sleeping love <br /><br />Björn Rudberg<br />brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-83678173202149839652013-06-21T13:32:53.454+02:002013-06-21T13:32:53.454+02:002. 7-7 (Summer)
open peony blossoms
her scent lin...2. 7-7 (Summer)<br /><br />open peony blossoms<br />her scent lingers beneath stars<br /><br /><br />(c) Rick Daddario Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com