tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post2063127417542055959..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #28, "a silent cry"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-47715906533166397272014-01-25T20:47:08.335+01:002014-01-25T20:47:08.335+01:00You'd asked about one of mineYou'd asked about one of mineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-1292829043064931302014-01-25T04:15:03.749+01:002014-01-25T04:15:03.749+01:00a wonderful haiku. thank you! a wonderful haiku. thank you! sunhttp://seraphim6.menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-49852832600901237052014-01-25T04:07:33.008+01:002014-01-25T04:07:33.008+01:00Hi Kristjaan, I like this. And to your other poin...Hi Kristjaan, I like this. And to your other point, you asked me recently if you could use one of mine for the Tan Renga and I said yes. If you want me to tell you which one I can check in my comments, but for the record, you may always use my haiku for this--you always give us credit, and that's all I need. Besides, I love to support the community and see what people do with the haiku.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-69246252660949886462014-01-25T02:47:13.509+01:002014-01-25T02:47:13.509+01:00packed with meaning and beauty Kristjaan. You are ...packed with meaning and beauty Kristjaan. You are an inspired poet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-60457437191911364292014-01-25T02:39:02.565+01:002014-01-25T02:39:02.565+01:00An awesome haiku, Kris! You make me fly with the ...An awesome haiku, Kris! You make me fly with the eagle.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-54649473143959136882014-01-24T21:56:26.144+01:002014-01-24T21:56:26.144+01:00This is an amazing haiku, I remember it. It is als...This is an amazing haiku, I remember it. It is also spiritual and I can see the link to haiku in the Amur post. I very much see a new genre of haiku with shamanistic influence being born from you today - very, very much. For me it is very exciting. It feels like a totally new genre, sometimes with a shaman explicably mentioned in the haiku, or his her drum, or dance, or sometimes by a 'shaman' word - here it is obvious, especially that the cry is silent, or silent to us at least. But here also the reader is the eage momentarily, and I see this as a very strong feature of this shamanistic haiku you have invented. The reader is no longer the appreciate audience, who reads, understands, meditates over the haiku. Instead the reader 'is' the haiku. He or she is involved. And as the haiku has the shaman element, which is the journey, then the reader momentarily is on that journey. Wonderful.PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.com