tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post2239001793112233427..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Special #55, O. Mabson Southard's "chanting, the pond's frogs ..."Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-79002096015878879612013-09-03T10:08:20.211+02:002013-09-03T10:08:20.211+02:00Basho's frog-pond is for sure timeless.Basho's frog-pond is for sure timeless.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-22386818106126475412013-09-03T10:06:47.166+02:002013-09-03T10:06:47.166+02:00I know what you mean. Sometimes haiku is called &#...I know what you mean. Sometimes haiku is called 'counted verse' because of the 5-7-5 structure. To me fitting haiku in that structure makes it somewhat artificial, but it's the classical way of writing haiku and maybe a good excercise to find the right words and fit them into the 5-7-5 structure.<br />Thank you for your comment.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-65001931439030372662013-09-03T09:14:27.116+02:002013-09-03T09:14:27.116+02:00I do like Southard's haiku...but Basho's i...I do like Southard's haiku...but Basho's is timeless isn;t it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-88729487013612698352013-09-03T02:21:23.771+02:002013-09-03T02:21:23.771+02:005-7-5 puts me into a humorous mood! For better or ...5-7-5 puts me into a humorous mood! For better or worse!Wabi Sabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/09/02/chanting-frog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-72322454298224255522013-09-03T00:36:47.476+02:002013-09-03T00:36:47.476+02:00Loving the O. Mabson Southard theme! Shame about ...Loving the O. Mabson Southard theme! Shame about having to keep it 5-7-5 though, seems a bit strained sometimes forcing something to fit.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-59565501397231051052013-09-03T00:35:10.136+02:002013-09-03T00:35:10.136+02:00Hi Bjorn,
What's this dVerse all about? I'...Hi Bjorn,<br />What's this dVerse all about? I've heard of it a couple of times now...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-115541404635312642013-09-02T22:39:46.912+02:002013-09-02T22:39:46.912+02:00I love your frog photo!I love your frog photo!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-87353447373958403332013-09-02T22:20:49.667+02:002013-09-02T22:20:49.667+02:00Wonderful and fun to write 575 again.. feels like ...Wonderful and fun to write 575 again.. feels like last year and haiku heights again... :-) <br /><br />Tomorrow I'm manning the bar at dVerse... would be fun to see some of you there.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com