tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post4872670700413566553..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem's Crossroads #6 A Leafless Tree (Soseki Natsume)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-51496250466405547712018-04-21T01:00:45.408+02:002018-04-21T01:00:45.408+02:00Soseki's haiku #1 strikes me as letting the ta...Soseki's haiku #1 strikes me as letting the tail wag the dog in pursuit of a fragment/phrase contrast.<br /><br />Soseki's haiku #2 is much better.<br /><br />Chèvrefeuille's haiku is by far my own favorite. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-29282802701755456502018-04-17T16:54:13.312+02:002018-04-17T16:54:13.312+02:00I like it. There's no crow, but if the crow ha...I like it. There's no crow, but if the crow had gone, there wouldn't be, would there? The silence is all.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-56822551770877145792018-04-16T12:16:12.402+02:002018-04-16T12:16:12.402+02:00You make me blush my friend. Thank you for your ki...You make me blush my friend. Thank you for your kind words and the appreciation for this haiku.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-89595655822987759572018-04-16T10:45:33.959+02:002018-04-16T10:45:33.959+02:00Hai!!!!!! Your very best haiku.....surely....just ...Hai!!!!!! Your very best haiku.....surely....just superb, superb. I bow...Hamishhttps://forestbathers.tictail.comnoreply@blogger.com