tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post6427675756251775668..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 13th: "the cool breeze" by OnitsuraUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-4328240384992626702016-05-13T18:29:56.910+02:002016-05-13T18:29:56.910+02:00I have changed it, you can visit Petra Domina now ...I have changed it, you can visit Petra Domina now through her link.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-60791187307459294812016-05-13T16:42:11.903+02:002016-05-13T16:42:11.903+02:00Hi Kristjaan. The link to Petra Domina goes back t...Hi Kristjaan. The link to Petra Domina goes back to the Carpe Diem site? Petru J Viljoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04821468855056711841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-82293413836284735512016-05-13T16:05:55.877+02:002016-05-13T16:05:55.877+02:00Brilliant two lines, Kristjaan! Esp. love sounds o...Brilliant two lines, Kristjaan! Esp. love sounds of 'symphony' and 'skylarks' and of course, how they sound together in the stanza. Success!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-31471189828647325832016-05-13T15:57:47.870+02:002016-05-13T15:57:47.870+02:00Dear humbird and Lovely Thing..is it possible to a...Dear humbird and Lovely Thing..is it possible to add the name/URL option to comments as I would like to comment on your haiku and renga, but am not able to at the moment...thanks!Forest Batherhttp://haiku-forest.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-35465956561127400172016-05-13T08:29:49.460+02:002016-05-13T08:29:49.460+02:00My stanza:
the cool breeze
fills the empty vault ...My stanza:<br /><br />the cool breeze<br />fills the empty vault of heaven<br />with the voice of the pine tree Onitsura<br /><br />falling asleep in deep grass<br />I dream of my childhood home Joyce LorensonJoyce Lorensonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-15144260927881109072016-05-12T20:39:27.238+02:002016-05-12T20:39:27.238+02:00Ha! You did O modest master!Ha! You did O modest master!Forest Batherhttp://haiku-forest.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.com