tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post6687096898789105218..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem's Distillation #5, Ezra Pound's ''The River-Merchant's Wife''Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-62563087964253223032013-12-15T05:08:16.532+01:002013-12-15T05:08:16.532+01:00i love your distillation - it almost follows the m...i love your distillation - it almost follows the master's poem. thank you for the bio on Ezra Pound - good to refresh the memory. it is, as Bjorn says, a very beautiful poem. sunhttp://seraphim6.menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-46088859011255270282013-11-18T23:38:16.602+01:002013-11-18T23:38:16.602+01:00yours flows quite nicely. A challenge indeed!yours flows quite nicely. A challenge indeed!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-8788414529340152162013-11-17T22:09:01.638+01:002013-11-17T22:09:01.638+01:00Your distillaiton so skillfully made .. I just wan...Your distillaiton so skillfully made .. I just wanted to bring it down to a single haiku... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-57924813668520926302013-11-16T21:55:36.574+01:002013-11-16T21:55:36.574+01:00What gorgeous distillation Kristjaan-loved them al...What gorgeous distillation Kristjaan-loved them all and as JRB says above,you have really condensed the whole poem as Haiku-wow!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-4553149465974448172013-11-16T02:21:18.259+01:002013-11-16T02:21:18.259+01:00You have transformed the poem in haiku so ell Kris...You have transformed the poem in haiku so ell Kristjaan.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-47943769125011517932013-11-15T22:40:20.800+01:002013-11-15T22:40:20.800+01:00I will give this a try.. I find it interesting to ...I will give this a try.. I find it interesting to condense Ezra Pound as that was one of his key words to condense words into something powerful... loved the poem.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com