tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post6741751752415910815..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Theme Week (6) 5 "Ask Jane ..."Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-48300559861963903932016-08-16T02:13:15.127+02:002016-08-16T02:13:15.127+02:00Thanks Sue.Thanks Sue.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-90403541836728383902016-08-14T16:55:45.725+02:002016-08-14T16:55:45.725+02:00There's always so much to learn from reading J...There's always so much to learn from reading Jane's insights into writing haiku - then attempting to include those techniques in your own writing. A great teacher. Thanks, Chèvrefeuille. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12303400932705395875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-87228023807019262482016-08-13T01:15:16.128+02:002016-08-13T01:15:16.128+02:00The juxtaposition of the fragment and the phrase (...The juxtaposition of the fragment and the phrase (in whatever order they appear) may seem incongruous at first. Much of the fun comes from realizing that the juxtaposition does make sense, or that one part clarifies the other.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-19404013763170448092016-08-12T06:04:47.919+02:002016-08-12T06:04:47.919+02:00Thanks for this reminder on how to approach a bett...Thanks for this reminder on how to approach a better written ku.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-29894032370494651812016-08-11T20:00:34.317+02:002016-08-11T20:00:34.317+02:00Actually I rather like the 'fragment and phras...Actually I rather like the 'fragment and phrase form' and usually try to aim for this in my writing<br /><br />Much loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.com