tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post9206572568581688734..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem #745 moonriseUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-61221591815002462202015-06-01T22:33:11.003+02:002015-06-01T22:33:11.003+02:00Well, I missed the deadline between swim meets and...Well, I missed the deadline between swim meets and puppy sitting. http://jadcock.blogspot.com/2015/06/moonrise.html if anyone cares to read. Chev, you are stretching my 68 year old brain so much! Your work is amazing.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-35614067577466672022015-05-30T15:36:34.489+02:002015-05-30T15:36:34.489+02:00Thank you Chev....Your article and poem yanked me ...Thank you Chev....Your article and poem yanked me back 60 years or so to Okinawa and my first overseas tour.....a young boy, just out of high school, learning about the world....opie houstonhttps://www.facebook.com/pages/Opies-poetry-friends/530846836971195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-51302312075740923812015-05-30T06:29:26.144+02:002015-05-30T06:29:26.144+02:00This was _quite_ a challenge, Chev! Your renga is...This was _quite_ a challenge, Chev! Your renga is skillful --- masterful. And once again you've given us so much in this post -- from your example, to the melon haiku, and all the background information. Thank you for another great post :)Blog It Or Lose Ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16386952096217793342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-50455632271130635992015-05-29T18:57:14.904+02:002015-05-29T18:57:14.904+02:00Well....we are learning very important things thes...Well....we are learning very important things these days, after the karumi-style, that I personallt found so fascinating. But aside from that, your renga is a masterpiece of the genre, for want of another word. Why do I say that? Because I read about the renga evening's in Jane's website you linked here, and I can see how you linked ideas with imagery, the woodcutting and woodpecker to young leaves to love a long time ago. It is going to be very hard to emulate the approach, which does not rely on direct, logical linking, but something further, and anyway, our theme is so good I am not sure how to find another! I will think!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445997176174265322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-87337510617629989942015-05-29T18:48:34.127+02:002015-05-29T18:48:34.127+02:00Wow...this is just stunning KP. Will read this a f...Wow...this is just stunning KP. Will read this a few times.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.com