tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post1303496368991017018..comments2024-03-08T21:57:05.754+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Special #126, Sogi's "Butterfly home"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-74678100830738916612015-01-09T19:58:31.670+01:002015-01-09T19:58:31.670+01:00Ouf, your haiku flashes so many images in my mind&...Ouf, your haiku flashes so many images in my mind's eye! wonderful haiku, Kristjaan and the translation is another story...a great prompt that conjure so many images and emotions.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-68851247077059394132015-01-09T06:48:10.636+01:002015-01-09T06:48:10.636+01:00You're right, Pirate. That "broken window...You're right, Pirate. That "broken windows" haiku ... we need more of these. It's wonderful! Lollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-44046400721419908012015-01-09T01:15:48.571+01:002015-01-09T01:15:48.571+01:00there's a mystery of sadness here... still a h...there's a mystery of sadness here... still a homeWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-45531412936747494712015-01-08T21:50:44.634+01:002015-01-08T21:50:44.634+01:00Thank you for translating for us and giving us suc...Thank you for translating for us and giving us such a beautiful prompt, KristjaanAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-6595013832984387552015-01-08T19:06:52.168+01:002015-01-08T19:06:52.168+01:00Love how both the haiku (but especially yours) tol...Love how both the haiku (but especially yours) told a whole story.. Great inspiration for haibun.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-23684723381254052542015-01-08T12:12:13.908+01:002015-01-08T12:12:13.908+01:00Stunning - both of the haiku but yours really hits...Stunning - both of the haiku but yours really hits between the shoulder blades...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03743225966653292820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-36444376301056433102015-01-08T08:25:23.985+01:002015-01-08T08:25:23.985+01:00One of your very best, master Chevrefeuille! So mu...One of your very best, master Chevrefeuille! So much there, topical, strong imagery and room for interpretation, yet all showed and nothing told - in that way I think you again showed by example. Too many times in haiku and in the haiku with the haibun we are explaining the ''facts'' too much, or making summaries and conclusions in 3 lines, choosing grandiose themes of life. This haiku shows how we need to look more and find an interesting image. Very nice haiku indeed. PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.com