tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post2501808469971591548..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #98 Choka ... the long Japanese poemUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-40731266960267849722019-08-18T19:22:07.161+02:002019-08-18T19:22:07.161+02:00I really like your choka - and the images it conju...I really like your choka - and the images it conjures ... it's very engaging and vivid - you've used sound and sensory touch - the word scar is so evocative and telling of the heat - and then the rain, the scents, the idea of being refreshed and reborn etc. - then creating new heat in love .... it's very rich, sensual .... you should allow yourself to dabble in longer forms more, but I suspect perhaps you find it harder to catch words, since you write the Japanese forms in English - <br />still, this is so wonderful to read - thank you for sharing it :)<br /><br />have a most wonderful week to come, I hope ... <br /><br />namasté<br />WildChild47https://www.blogger.com/profile/05903357601592060653noreply@blogger.com