tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post2591770695351938289..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #2 MistUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-84065629347327108892016-11-04T11:30:53.070+01:002016-11-04T11:30:53.070+01:00Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor # 2 Mist:
mid morning
...Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor # 2 Mist:<br /><br />mid morning <br />still falling<br />a drenching mist<br />from the lean to shed<br />the bleat of lambsJoyce Lorensonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-5641753295319298882016-11-03T21:36:26.306+01:002016-11-03T21:36:26.306+01:00Oh, your tanka is intriguing. Thanks for another ...Oh, your tanka is intriguing. Thanks for another day of prompts. You are the best!Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-35877590138617789092016-11-02T20:59:35.144+01:002016-11-02T20:59:35.144+01:00Your tanka is evocative, mysterious, reminds me a ...Your tanka is evocative, mysterious, reminds me a touch of one of your finest haiku years ago. The word bitches is very very strong in English. Perhaps witches?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11401894615765922468noreply@blogger.com