tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post2785544051258896910..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Special #59, Southard's fifth and last one for this month "widening rings"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-60749129946948822352013-09-27T02:35:14.716+02:002013-09-27T02:35:14.716+02:00I've watched a crane "fish" in a pon...I've watched a crane "fish" in a pond and tried to capture that. Not sure I succeeded. But that's what I was going for...in case you don't get it. Little froggy hanging on while water ripples.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-4346183258529646862013-09-27T00:56:55.143+02:002013-09-27T00:56:55.143+02:00Lovely haiku, Kristjaan.Lovely haiku, Kristjaan.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-80831202348168446342013-09-26T22:47:14.607+02:002013-09-26T22:47:14.607+02:00my most favorite Southard haiku...thanx for sharin...my most favorite Southard haiku...thanx for sharing ,,.joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-47909013460509089182013-09-26T21:59:40.316+02:002013-09-26T21:59:40.316+02:00Your haiku today has a particularly magical image....Your haiku today has a particularly magical image. I really like this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-45614036477779953262013-09-26T21:23:20.029+02:002013-09-26T21:23:20.029+02:00Not an easy haiku to write an inspired one from.. ...Not an easy haiku to write an inspired one from.. I think yours is very good. The dance is very visual... and I can see those water-lilies---brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com