tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post3352503570439827279..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 10th "the willow leaves fallen" by Yosa BusonUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-28718306263021482732016-05-10T11:48:30.903+02:002016-05-10T11:48:30.903+02:00the willow leaves fallen,
the spring gone dry,
roc...the willow leaves fallen,<br />the spring gone dry,<br />rocks here and there Buson<br /><br />hot sun overhead<br />I remove my pilgrim's robe Joyce LorensonJoyce Lorensonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-6489325807634331922016-05-09T21:49:05.183+02:002016-05-09T21:49:05.183+02:00Gave it a try Kristjaan. And by the way: just noti...Gave it a try Kristjaan. And by the way: just noticed some of my writing is included in the Tibetan Book of Living and Dying. Thank you so much! Am really honoured. Petru J Viljoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04821468855056711841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-55481176953968154862016-05-09T20:31:49.494+02:002016-05-09T20:31:49.494+02:00I think a difficult one. The imagery you presente...I think a difficult one. The imagery you presented contrasts with BUson's dryness. That collision of opposites makes the resfer thinkForest Batherhttp://haiku-forest.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.com