tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post3492888402921773193..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 22nd: "on a windless day" by Cheryl Lynn (a.k.a. Tournesol)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-14471560758390049942016-05-29T07:21:14.739+02:002016-05-29T07:21:14.739+02:00https://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2016/05/27/a-s...https://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2016/05/27/a-stupa/<br /><br />a stupa<br />Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 22nd: “on a windless day” by Cheryl Lynn (a.k.a. Tournesol)<br /><br />on a windless day<br />six circles take shape<br />a pebble skips (Tournesol)<br /><br />sweet memories rise up<br />smiles and tears in battle (Chèvrefeuille)<br /><br />I always admire Cheryl’s works ! She is an admirable poetess . having known each other for a long time , I could imagine her thoughts when I see this haiku / hokku .<br />now , here is my attempt to heighten Cheryl’s hokku :<br /><br />on a windless day<br />six circles take shape<br />a pebble skips (Tournesol)<br /><br />a few balancing stones<br />admire the skipping one<br />(milan)<br /><br /><br /><br />photo ( my pic )<br /><br />for,<br />chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_22.htmlMilan Rajkumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02031784743099285826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-1393491027234228202016-05-22T17:12:37.953+02:002016-05-22T17:12:37.953+02:00Intersetion
https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2016/0...Intersetion<br />https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2016/05/22/intersection-tan-renga/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-26741410171671389822016-05-22T11:42:59.096+02:002016-05-22T11:42:59.096+02:00on a windless day
six circles take shape
a pebble ...on a windless day<br />six circles take shape<br />a pebble skips Tournesol<br /><br />the swish and swirl of pond water<br />suddenly sun fish Joyce Lorenson<br />Joyce Lorensonnoreply@blogger.com