tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post3504250987401223469..comments2024-03-08T21:57:05.754+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem #742 under the trees (an example of the karumi-style)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-66827244425818145232015-05-27T10:32:12.969+02:002015-05-27T10:32:12.969+02:00One thing I really thought of afterwards.. I wrote...One thing I really thought of afterwards.. I wrote a prompt at dverse about antithesis.. where you pair opposites (or near opposites) so you span a wider set of possibilities.. I think that would work really well with Karumi.. I wouldn't say that petals and fish are opposites, but I think by using things that does not have near associates make it stronger.. I actually thought a little bit about it by combining nature with the mechanics of rusty trucks... maybe something to think about.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-10033764690912423862015-05-27T05:18:26.019+02:002015-05-27T05:18:26.019+02:00I agree with Bjorn ... I'd never thought about...I agree with Bjorn ... I'd never thought about avoiding verbs .. this is an interesting experiment .. thought I'm not sure I'd want to abandon every other style for karumi ... so I'm able to understand those who preferred to keep to their wab-sabi or whatever rather than going gung-ho karumi. Thanks for the interesting post.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-85051941981413891442015-05-27T04:59:09.281+02:002015-05-27T04:59:09.281+02:00Very challenging! I enjoyed your haiku!Very challenging! I enjoyed your haiku!Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-37599554365575556192015-05-27T04:13:14.997+02:002015-05-27T04:13:14.997+02:00I agree with Bjorn. Really quite amazing concepts....I agree with Bjorn. Really quite amazing concepts. And the snail does nor realise the sky has fallen around him. Very good posr.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445997176174265322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-58923372955490757422015-05-26T22:14:49.055+02:002015-05-26T22:14:49.055+02:00I very much enjoy this.. the list poetry in haiku,...I very much enjoy this.. the list poetry in haiku, I have never thought of that.. and to actually avoid verbs... which is the opposite you learn when you want to write strong poetry.. this was most usefulbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com