tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post4103653630806207954..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem "Little Creatures" #12, Snails, a haigaUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-16157587623346070592014-11-15T05:33:18.158+01:002014-11-15T05:33:18.158+01:00Beautiful cascading haiku. I am pleased you are c...Beautiful cascading haiku. I am pleased you are combining challenges and special features. Was becoming concerned about your becoming 'burned out' with all the time you put in on the challenges. Pace yourself, master of the haiku!Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-40431431161269053862014-11-14T20:01:23.424+01:002014-11-14T20:01:23.424+01:00I think your cascading haiku about the snail is my...I think your cascading haiku about the snail is my favourite thing I've read of yours, Chèvrefeuille - it has a wonderful circular completeness about it, from the little creature to the haiku mindset and back to the snail, finally.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12303400932705395875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-48571069771751484302014-11-13T21:44:19.018+01:002014-11-13T21:44:19.018+01:00There is no particular reason for the non-classica...There is no particular reason for the non-classical way of haiku. In the Western world haiku is not restricted to the 5-7-5 rule ... in Japan they don't talk about syllables but about 'onji' or sound-units. The 5-7-5 rule is meant for sound-units ... Feel free to follow your heart as you write/compose your haiku.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-76174990369945686852014-11-13T16:18:07.988+01:002014-11-13T16:18:07.988+01:00Hello Kristjaan,
you may have noticed tht i am a l...Hello Kristjaan,<br />you may have noticed tht i am a learner, both with haiku and twitter. Please forgive any errors.<br />Sometimes your short lines have 5 syllables and other times only 4. Is there a reason or is it optional?<br />I like your well thought out posts.joanna ukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18384148993585680645noreply@blogger.com