tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post4700429895396459265..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Special (2nd guest) Kala Ramesh #2 "tangled thoughts . . ." (tanka)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-38606349272661384442016-10-12T18:15:21.559+02:002016-10-12T18:15:21.559+02:00Sorry for this mistake, I found them listed under ...Sorry for this mistake, I found them listed under your name so I thought they were written by you. Sorry again. I have removed them. Now only your own tanka is in this episode.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-15496144795142032262016-10-12T05:49:54.967+02:002016-10-12T05:49:54.967+02:00Hi,
Just a quick note to say , these two tanka a...Hi, <br /><br />Just a quick note to say , these two tanka are NOT WRITTEN by me:<br /><br />how much rain<br />can a little cloud hold<br />the overspill<br />of resentment<br />her only identity <br /><br />><br /><br />the crows<br />are vanishing<br />at twilight<br />my child stretches<br />the end of play<br /><br />>><br /><br />An evening of 'tangled thoughts' in my tanka. <br />Thanks <br />warmly, <br />_kala_kalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13375542094259298054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-61214518453083739942016-10-11T08:33:26.017+02:002016-10-11T08:33:26.017+02:00Carpe Diem Special Kala Ramesh # 2:
cold nights
c...Carpe Diem Special Kala Ramesh # 2:<br /><br />cold nights<br />crickets and katydids<br />no longer sing<br />wearing flannel<br />and socks to bedJoyce Lorensonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-78968464762550778302016-10-10T15:47:10.855+02:002016-10-10T15:47:10.855+02:00Careful, your tanka might be better than your haik...Careful, your tanka might be better than your haiku! Kala's are wonderful.Woodsmanhttp://managuagunn.booklikes.comnoreply@blogger.com