tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post4785380986845457184..comments2024-03-08T21:57:05.754+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem #414, Joruri-ji (temple 46)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-58085203613348388272014-03-06T11:37:02.693+01:002014-03-06T11:37:02.693+01:00You're right ... plumblossoms fall not as a wh...You're right ... plumblossoms fall not as a whole, but petal by petal ... thank you. I have changed it.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-57919719965928509672014-03-06T07:14:25.002+01:002014-03-06T07:14:25.002+01:00lovely post as usual, Kristjaan. That second haiku...lovely post as usual, Kristjaan. That second haiku of Issa's is a beauty. your first one I like very much too. the second one I like the haiku and the structure but wonder if the middle line should say 'petals' rather than 'blossoms' because, unlike camellias that fall whole, plums tend to fall petal by petal because the calyx stays behind and becomes the fruit. or maybe it's different where you are or the variety. hope you don't mind my saying… :)BelindaBroughtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07869532077301104783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-56656804016954618942014-03-06T02:28:14.694+01:002014-03-06T02:28:14.694+01:00I really enjoyed your haiku!I really enjoyed your haiku!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-10713895921568518812014-03-05T22:11:39.178+01:002014-03-05T22:11:39.178+01:00Always so much wonderful information in your posts...Always so much wonderful information in your posts ~ and fitting to much of my spiritual beliefs as I evolve ~ Lovely haiku but summer? I will take Spring at least ~ xxx<br />artmusedog and carol<br />www.acreativeharbor.comcarol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-48252313545935503802014-03-05T15:40:10.326+01:002014-03-05T15:40:10.326+01:00We are still looking for spring here :)
Winter is...We are still looking for spring here :) <br />Winter is hanging on, no plum blossoms yet. <br />Your haiku makes me smile. Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-56511175823032721832014-03-05T13:34:51.939+01:002014-03-05T13:34:51.939+01:00Your posts are becoming evermore rich, dear Chèvre...Your posts are becoming evermore rich, dear Chèvrefeuille. And your haiku are spot on. Yesterday's...and now today, the one by one, simplicity, yet evocating so much. I think Basho would sit and have a tea with you, without the need to exchange a lot of words, just a common understanding.PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.com