tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post5614864710615549998..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Sparkling Stars #20, Kala Ramesh's "a new moon sky"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-73962962578826181962015-03-17T08:51:44.345+01:002015-03-17T08:51:44.345+01:00Enjoyed your post and learning about yet another g...Enjoyed your post and learning about yet another great poet. Enjoyed your haiku! Especially the first.Adas Alcovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010269533190196240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-84429375401694558542015-03-15T20:25:08.780+01:002015-03-15T20:25:08.780+01:00Awesome ... Kala this is a honor that you have com...Awesome ... Kala this is a honor that you have commented on this post. Your haiku are beauties and I am honored that you are ok with me using your haiku. Thank you for your suggestion for my 'shooting star' haiku and i will keep it in mind. Thank you ...<br /><br />Namaste,<br /><br />KristjaanChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-7700719153967181822015-03-15T16:18:05.475+01:002015-03-15T16:18:05.475+01:00Hi, Krishjaan,
Thank you so much for liking my h...Hi, Krishjaan, <br /><br />Thank you so much for liking my haiku and to also feature me here. I'm deeply touched. <br />I liked your first haiku a lot:<br /><br />a shooting star<br />draws a silvery line<br />against the black sky<br /><br />Haiku is best when it has two images juxtaposed - which leaves your reader with something to do!!<br /><br />Supposing you said:<br /><br />a shooting star<br />draws a silvery line . . . <br />the black sky<br /><br />Nice. <br />warmly, <br />_kala_kalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13375542094259298054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-61961337415560930742015-03-15T11:46:26.329+01:002015-03-15T11:46:26.329+01:00You're welcome Jen. Jane introduced me to her ...You're welcome Jen. Jane introduced me to her and she really is a great haiku poetess.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-25229630064754697332015-03-15T11:45:43.970+01:002015-03-15T11:45:43.970+01:00Thanks Janice. I feel a connection with her and sh...Thanks Janice. I feel a connection with her and she really has composed wonderful haiku.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-349052738277376222015-03-15T11:44:49.930+01:002015-03-15T11:44:49.930+01:00I do like her haiku. I am grateful to Jane that sh...I do like her haiku. I am grateful to Jane that she introduced Kala Ramesh to me.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-70199231923346837702015-03-15T08:54:55.432+01:002015-03-15T08:54:55.432+01:00Thanks for sharing a wonderful new voice with us -...Thanks for sharing a wonderful new voice with us --- I'll have to find more of her work. Beautiful -- and very interesting. :)Blog It Or Lose Ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16386952096217793342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-14678668061993301312015-03-15T05:40:35.409+01:002015-03-15T05:40:35.409+01:00Thank you for introducing this Indian poet. You h...Thank you for introducing this Indian poet. You have equaled her work in beauty.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-67538327466717969822015-03-14T18:34:13.361+01:002015-03-14T18:34:13.361+01:00Very nice - I am a great fan of Indian haiku pets....Very nice - I am a great fan of Indian haiku pets. Your haiku fit so well - it is clear you really liked her haiku!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445997176174265322noreply@blogger.com