tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post6261266268412204412..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem #1099 Symphony No. 3 by Louise FarrencUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-59620586081248024852016-12-17T20:22:20.029+01:002016-12-17T20:22:20.029+01:00Nice music indeed and lovely tanka. Have you thoug...Nice music indeed and lovely tanka. Have you thought of moving tanka to the 2nd person, making the last line "you, the one I will love forever" ? I like tanka in 2nd person with 'you' but it is a hard choice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11401894615765922468noreply@blogger.com