tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post6513039101821350176..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #1, Juxtaposition Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-11633750075938324092015-01-22T07:53:37.982+01:002015-01-22T07:53:37.982+01:00Excellent post Kristjaan! It's interesting to ...Excellent post Kristjaan! It's interesting to read.best essay review sitehttp://ukessayreviews.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-79113953616294785912015-01-07T19:34:53.902+01:002015-01-07T19:34:53.902+01:00Kristjaan, interesting challenge. Studying at the ...Kristjaan, interesting challenge. Studying at the moment the various articles available although I may not be able to post as I'm having to go away for a little while.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-5201760484528972372015-01-07T19:32:50.492+01:002015-01-07T19:32:50.492+01:00Bjorn, I'm busy reading this article and they ...Bjorn, I'm busy reading this article and they have a paragraph on haiku as well. It's very interesting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-40298379435797178222015-01-07T03:37:42.451+01:002015-01-07T03:37:42.451+01:00Great prompt --- a tougher challenge than initiall...Great prompt --- a tougher challenge than initially expected! Thank you for continuing to stretch our horizons beyond our comfort level -- it keeps us on our toes!<br /><br />And -- love the snow drops in the background! Especially since the temp hit 10 F here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-75091605893358491912015-01-06T20:57:48.009+01:002015-01-06T20:57:48.009+01:00Oh I love this challenge - agree - brilliant!
Hope...Oh I love this challenge - agree - brilliant!<br />Hope I got i right ;)B i r g i t t ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01850896007779359003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-63977587543266593122015-01-06T20:43:37.339+01:002015-01-06T20:43:37.339+01:00A very interesting read. I don't think Juxtapo...A very interesting read. I don't think Juxtaposition is especially natural for me, but that's why I'm looking forward to the Techniques prompts ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12303400932705395875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-18037291986834520732015-01-06T19:56:53.860+01:002015-01-06T19:56:53.860+01:00You have come up with such a wonderful, fun, yet e...You have come up with such a wonderful, fun, yet educational new feature here, Kristjaan - thank you! And your masterful haiku with the vivid contrasts...so alive...a pleasure to be inspired by/learn from.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03743225966653292820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-70863262951596691272015-01-06T19:26:18.674+01:002015-01-06T19:26:18.674+01:00An excellent explanation of "juxing." A...An excellent explanation of "juxing." Alexy Andreyev's "icicle tip' poem is a superb example.<br /><br />I am not sure what the juxtaposition is in Basho's frog pond haiku. Rather I believe it's an example of "yugen." Yūgen is a Japanese word pertaining to a profound awareness of the universe which evokes feelings that are inexplicably deep and too mysterious for words.Lollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-31441973581224154722015-01-06T16:25:07.413+01:002015-01-06T16:25:07.413+01:00I have given this a lot of thought myself.. and I ...I have given this a lot of thought myself.. and I think that one should be very careful with it so it does not look too artificial.. I have found myself more drawn to the volta, a concept that has been (and should be) applied when writing sonnets for instance.. it's more of a shift of viewpoint.. for instance in Basho's classic haiku, it's not really a juxtaposition but more of a volta -- shifting from visual to audio sense .. I think the article on volta in wikipedia can be applied partly to haiku as well... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-55176412005060096942015-01-06T12:40:05.761+01:002015-01-06T12:40:05.761+01:00Very good post - a strong set of haiku there, and ...Very good post - a strong set of haiku there, and a challenge....PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-77415619983170199262015-01-06T11:55:47.174+01:002015-01-06T11:55:47.174+01:00Brilliant tutorial, Kristjaan.
Not easy to get my ...Brilliant tutorial, Kristjaan.<br />Not easy to get my head around the actual concept of juxtaposition. I wonder where contrast leaves off and side-by-side begins. All a matter of degree I suppose.joanna ukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18384148993585680645noreply@blogger.com