tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post7533942623881924139..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem #736 one patch of a rice fieldUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-82562508996314788262015-05-25T17:14:08.542+02:002015-05-25T17:14:08.542+02:00I really like the possible dual meaning you have i...I really like the possible dual meaning you have in your haiku, Chèvrefeuille - the historical seeing of the actual willow or the sense of "finally I saw" in the present day because of Saigyo's song. Both meanings read so naturally.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12303400932705395875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-82657647767454859542015-05-24T04:51:42.416+02:002015-05-24T04:51:42.416+02:00Mine is late, but up at: https://purplepeninportl...Mine is late, but up at: https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2015/05/24/picnic/Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com