tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post8346593821899156913..comments2024-03-24T14:25:25.667+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem #245, ListeningUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-9046426341162587112013-07-14T18:08:11.122+02:002013-07-14T18:08:11.122+02:00I am not familiar with that rule. But then again, ...I am not familiar with that rule. But then again, I don't know where cascade haiku came from either. I have yet to see a cascade haiku in any published haiku journal (Frog Pond and the others). <br /><br />If you like that approach, try it out and see if you like it. Lollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-67751912035308204942013-07-14T17:06:27.957+02:002013-07-14T17:06:27.957+02:00Good day Maggie, to give answer on your question. ...Good day Maggie, to give answer on your question. Interchanging the first and third line is one of the classical rules. So you're right. However in the Western world that's not always the rule. Hope that this answered your question.<br /><br />NamasteChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-68604050905708116822013-07-14T09:03:45.994+02:002013-07-14T09:03:45.994+02:00An excellent Haiku today Kristjaan. Quite masterfu...An excellent Haiku today Kristjaan. Quite masterful :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-24056473578850714802013-07-14T07:31:19.002+02:002013-07-14T07:31:19.002+02:00I really like your haiku today. Rain is one of my ...I really like your haiku today. Rain is one of my favorite sounds, and it sounds different depending on the surface it hits.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-66573341616509818442013-07-14T06:54:28.030+02:002013-07-14T06:54:28.030+02:00A question. I think I'm going mad. Do you or d...A question. I think I'm going mad. Do you or does anyone else recall anything about haiku where the first and third lines should be able to be interchanged without changing the meaning? I can't find it now and swear that's how I learned the 5-7-5...not the Nahaiwrimo way. Help please. I understand better the form now which should improve my haiku, but I had to have seen that specific rule somewhere.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-1876565218938438962013-07-14T01:12:34.013+02:002013-07-14T01:12:34.013+02:00Great theme and great haiku!Great theme and great haiku!stephhttp://restraintunfettered.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-42840945391480203822013-07-13T23:55:53.597+02:002013-07-13T23:55:53.597+02:00Lovely haiku!Lovely haiku!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-19556283048892231222013-07-13T22:23:36.711+02:002013-07-13T22:23:36.711+02:00I love you haiku today and the listening is an awe...I love you haiku today and the listening is an awesome prompt. need to think about this .. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-38806974043440602342013-07-13T20:18:41.591+02:002013-07-13T20:18:41.591+02:00Beautiful work yet again.. the pitter-patter of th...Beautiful work yet again.. the pitter-patter of the rain is always resplendent. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-54790728359211365292013-07-13T19:47:04.160+02:002013-07-13T19:47:04.160+02:00You were early Wabi Sabi, I hadn't seen the vi...You were early Wabi Sabi, I hadn't seen the vid myself. It's more for our next month so I have changed it. Hope you like the new one too.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8512327745848627452.post-20113377176788699012013-07-13T19:01:06.146+02:002013-07-13T19:01:06.146+02:00This poem resonates with me - listening to rain i...This poem resonates with me - listening to rain is one of the sweetest, most calming meditations for me. Thank you!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com