Monday, August 10, 2015

Carpe Diem's Renga Party #1 In The Twilight -- update !!


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

My excuses for this Renga Party Update, but I have a little change in the "line-up". Georgia asked me to change places with Usha or Dancing Echoes, because she cannot participate in the "first round" at the place in "line-up" as planned. So I have a little change to give Georgia the opportunity to participate. Georgia ... I have changed you with Usha, so you (Georgia) have to write/compose link 9 and Usha you have to write/create link 11.

First the old "line-up" part:

7.[3][A] Sky
8.[2] [Misc. / Love] Lolly
9.[3][Misc. / Love] Usha
10.[2][Misc. / Love] Dancing Echoes
11.[3] [Misc.] Georgia
12.[2] [Misc.] Dolores

And here is the new "line-up" part, the changes are highlighted in red:

7.[3][A] Sky
8.[2] [Misc. / Love] Lolly
9.[3][Misc. / Love] Georgia
10.[2][Misc. / Love] 
Dancing Echoes
11.[3] [Misc.] Usha
12.[2] [Misc.] Dolores

Sorry for this little change, but I love to give you all, who registered, the opportunity to participate.

Warm greetings,

Chèvrefeuille, your host.

7 comments:

  1. Dear Kristjaan, i have been reading through the renga verses so far posted and i realize there is no standard verse format. for instance i am reading two liners where there are 8-syllable verses and three liners where there are 4.5.4 syllable verses
    Since i have participated in rengas before where verses adhered to the strict 575 and 77 syllable verse counts, within the season and folio pattern you have laid out, i was wondering is this free form deliberate or should writers be wary of verse-syllable count as one of the aspects of this kind of renga

    much love
    gillena

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    1. Dear Gillena, I have seen that too, but I don't think it's a problem that the links aren't following the 5-7-5 or 7-7 syllables count, because this Renga Party is just for fun and becoming familiar with collaborative writing. Renga is not something that several of our family-members will do.
      Of course ... if this first Renga Party turns out great than I will create another Renga Party and than I will ask our family-members to follow the rules.

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  2. Got it, Thank you Kristjaan

    much love...

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  3. Dear Kristjaan , I would be very grateful if you kindly tell me where the link is right now .
    Eagerly waiting ,
    Milan

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  4. Dear Kristjaan , Would you pleas kindly tel me where the link is now . sincerely

    milan

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    1. Dear Milan, at this moment we are at link 10 and its Dancing Echoes' turn.

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