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Showing posts with label Troiku Hineri. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Troiku Hineri. Show all posts
Saturday, January 25, 2020
Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #113 Troiku Hineri ... at dawn
!! Open for your submissions Sunday January 26th at 7:00 PM (CET) !!
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
The last days were very busy, so I couldn't publish or regular Friday episode and a bit late with the Weekend Meditation. My excuses for it.
This weekend I love to challenge you to create a Troiku Hineri. What doea it mean? I will give you a haiku. With that haiku you create a Troiku. Than you have three new haiku. The Hineri (with a twist) is that I love to challenge you to create with those three new haiku NINE new haiku following the Troiku idea, so you have to create three new haiku from every haiku you created from the given haiku.
I have chosen one of the first haiku by Yozakura, the Unknown Haiku Poet. Here is his first haiku to work with:
yoake ni arau tsuyude watashino ashisaichoubi
at dawn
I wash my feet with dew
the longest day
© Yozakura (1640-1716)
A nice challenge I think for this weekend. Have an awesome weekend!
This Weekend Meditation is open for your submissions next Sunday January 26th at 7:00 PM (CET) and will remain open until February 2nd at noon (CET).
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Friday, June 21, 2019
Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #90 Crossroads ... Summer Solstice (Troiku Hineri)
!! Open for your submissions next Sunday June 23rd at 7:00 PM (CEST) !!
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new weekend meditation here at our wonderful Haiku Kai, the place to be if you like to create and share Japanese poetry. I hope you all enjoy this Troiku month and ofcourse I hope that your muses are active to inspire you.
This weekend I love to challenge you with a Crossroads episode. As you all know in the Crossroads feature I will give you two (sometimes more) haiku from which you have to create a so called "fusion-haiku". That "fusion-haiku" you have to use to create a Troiku with. This weekend I love to challenge you a little bit more.
This weekend you have to create a Troiku Hineri. What does that mean? Well .. as you all know a Troiku starts with a "source-haiku" from which you have to create three new haiku using the separated three lines as the first line of the new haiku. You created than three new haiku. In a Troiku Hineri you are repeating that same creating proces with the separated lines of your three new haiku. Doing that you create a total of nine new haiku (in total a Troiku Hineri gives you 12 new haiku).
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Summer Solstice at Stonehenge (UK) |
Today (June 21st) on the Northern hemisphere Summer has started, so for this weekend meditation "Crossroads" I have chosen Summer Solstice as theme. Here are the haiku to work with, one by a classical haiku poet and one by a modern haiku poet:
this short night -
from a shallow well I scoop
a persimmon flower
© Yosa Buson (1716-1784)
solstice splits
between the peach halves
a red stone sun
© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)
Two wonderful haiku I think. It gives you the opportunity to create a "fusion-haiku", a symbiosis, between ancient - and modern times.
Enjoy your weekend ... This weekend meditation is open for your submissions next Sunday June 23rd at 7:00 PM (CEST) and will remain open until June 30th at noon (CEST). Have a wonderful sunny weekend full of inspiration, but also time to relax ...
Friday, January 11, 2019
Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #67 Troiku Hineri: Apple Blossoms
!! Open for your submissions next Sunday January 13th at 7:00 PM (CET) !!
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new edition of our CDHK Weekend Meditation. Earlier I promised you to follow the Pan American Highway in our weekend meditations this month, but I have decided to leave the Pan American Highway and give you another challenge for this weekend.
We have done this more often here at CDHK so here is your task for this weekend meditation: I will give you four haiku to work with. You may decide which haiku you want to use to create a "fusion-ku" with. Of course the "crossroads-idea" is not the only thing you have to do. I love to challenge you to create a Troiku Hineri with your "fusion-ku". What is a "Troiku Hineri"? Well let me try to explain that:
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Logo Troiku Hineri |
As you all know a Troiku starts with a haiku and the following three haiku start with the separated lines of the first haiku. In a "Troiku Hineri" (a Troiku with a twist) I challenge you to do the same with the three haiku following the "starter-haiku" of the Troiku. So you have to create nine new haiku with the separated lines of your first three haiku of the "regular Troiku". All together ... you have to create TWELVE new haiku and ofcourse your "fusion-ku". It's a tough challenge I think ... so take your time, meditate and contemplate on what you are going to share with us.
Here are the four haiku to work with, all haiku by Jane Reichhold and taken from her online Saijiki "A Dictionary of Haiku", Spring section:
light carried in my arms
apple blossoms from a neighbor
on my doorstep
clusters talking
together in admiration
apple blossoms
sun transformed
into apple blossoms
the ground is level
the dam is broken
spring cascades into valleys
as apple blossoms
© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)
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Peacock, Apple Blossom by Bairei Kono (1899) (image found on Pinterest) |
This weekend meditation is open for your submissions next Sunday January 13th at 7:00 PM (CET) and will remain open until January 20th at noon (CET).
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