!! triple episode !!
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
First I have an announcement to make: this will be a "triple episode", because I hadn't time to create our episode of today, so I decided to bring you two episodes in one. This can mean that this episode will be a little bit longer than I usually do, but than we will be "back on track".
Second: Thank you all for your kind words and prayers for my dad. Just a few hours ago I heard that he will be released from the hospital. This afternoon we will have a conversation with his cardiologist.
Third: It's almost Christmas and the end of 2015 is almost there. I love to ask you all something. Please share with me, with us, with our Haiku Kai your thoughts about 2015. Which were the highlights, which prompts did you like and maybe you have ideas for new prompts or making our Haiku Kai even better than it is already.
Okay ... let's go to our "triple episode" of our "Narrow Road" which we are walking together with Basho and his companion Sora. Have fun!
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the scent
of early rice
coming in from the right
the Ariso Sea
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
Across the
mountains of Unohana-yama and the valleys of Kurikara- dani, I entered the city
of Kanazawa on July the fifteenth, where I met a merchant from Osaka named
Kasho who invited me to stay at his inn.
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| Unohana-yama |
There was in this city a man named Issho whose unusual love of poetry had
gained him a lasting reputation among the verse writers of the day. I was told,
however, that he had died unexpectedly in the winter of the past year. I
attended the memorial service held for him by his brother.
the tomb
also shakes
my weeping voice is
the autumn wind
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
A visit to
a certain hermitage, were I was invited to attend a rengaparty. I wrote the
following greeting verse, which we used to start the renga with:
autumn
coolness
each peeling with our hands
melons and eggplant
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
red more
red
in spite of the indifferent sun
an autumn breeze
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
(note: normally the autumn wind was thought of as white)
At a place
called Little Pines:
a lovely
name
at Little Pines blows
bush clover and thatch reeds
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
(note: As you all know (I think) Basho was a very important and famous
renga-master in his time. He attended a lot of renga parties and was often the
haiku poet who wrote the hokku. The above haiku was the starting verse of a so
called “yoyoshi”, a renga of forty-four links. This haiku which was used as the
hokku, was the greeting verse to the host of this “yoyoshi”, Kosen, the chief
priest of the Hiyoshi Shrine at Komatsue (which means “little pines”).
I went to
the Tada Shrine located in the vicinity, where I saw Lord Sanemori's helmet and
a piece of brocaded cloth that he had worn under his armor. According to the
legends, these were given him by Lord Yoshitomo while he was still in the
service of the Minamotos. The helmet was certainly an extraordinary one, with
an arabesque of gold chrysanthemums covering the visor and the ear plate, a
fiery dragon resting proudly on the crest, and two curved horns pointing to the
sky. The chronicle of the shrine gave a vivid account of how, upon the heroic
death of Lord Sanemori, Kiso no Yoshinaka had sent his important retainer
Higuchi no Jiro to the shrine to dedicate the helmet with a letter of prayer.
how pitiful
under the armored helmet
a cricket
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
An awesome part of the "Narrow Road" and while we are leaving Tada Shrine ... we also leave Carpe Diem Haiku Kai for today.
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I have sought all over the Internet for an example of the poetry by Issho as mentioned in the above episode and finally I only found one haiku written by Issho. Issho was a very famous haiku poet in his own region, but he died in 1688. Basho loved to visit him, but the only thing he finds is the grave of Issho, who passed away a year before Basho arrived at the village were Issho lived.
Here is the only haiku which I could find written by Kasugi Issho. I have tried to translate it and honor Issho with that translation.
mi
tsukushita me wa shirgiku ni modori keri
seen with
my eyes
white chrysanthemums
again I saw them
© Kasugi
Issho (1652-1688)
A wonderful haiku I think, but Issho was more famous for his love poems, however I haven't sought the Internet for his love poems ...
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| Tulips |
finally spring
one tulip after another blooms
rainbow garden
© Chèvrefeuille
What a joy it was to create this episode. I hope you did like it and ... I hope it inspires you to write an all new haiku, tanka or other Japanese poetry form.
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until December 24th at noon (CET). I hope to publish our new episode, a new episode of our Haiku Writing Techniques and the fourth CD special by Georgia, later on. For now .... have fun, be inspired and share.
