Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Here it is ... finally ... our first Ghost-Writer week. I hope this week will inspire you all to write wonderful haiku and maybe this week will make you enthousiastic to be a Ghost-Writer yourself for Carpe Diem ... if you would like to be Ghost-Writer for May 2014 than let me know and I will see what I can do for you. As all is going well than I hope to do a new Ghost-Writer week in week 19 (May 5th - 11th) ... Oke ... here it is our first Ghost Writer, Jules of Jules Gems and Stuff. Enjoy the read and share your haiku, senryu, tanka, kyoka or haibun with our haiku-family here at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
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Ghost
Writer for Haiku Kai: Jules (JulesPaige because words are like Jewels on a
Page)
While I
only have informal training in the art of haiku I enjoy the challenge of short
forms to speak volumes. The haibun, while a good bit of prose can have haiku
throughout or just as an ending summation. Though I have only been blogging for
about two or three years, I have been experimenting with words for four decades
(plus). And one of the things I enjoy doing is mixing short forms, I am a rebel
that way. Some of my favorite short forms I have shared on my daily WordPress
site on the following pages which explains these forms:
You can find more about these poetry-forms at:
While I
know there are many more short forms I encourage you too, to mix haiku with
other short forms and share the 'how to’s' and your verse with us. I offer
these examples:
Mirror Elfje Sandwiches a haiku
Water
even lakes
constantly moves, flowing
tugged by the moon
change
even lakes
constantly moves, flowing
tugged by the moon
change
returning
to start -
looking to go home again
and yet we cannot…
looking to go home again
and yet we cannot…
change
tugged by the moon
moments ever changing
forward motion
tears
tugged by the moon
moments ever changing
forward motion
tears
©JP/davh
Mixed short forms: Elfje Trio, haiku (three lines) and a three words
A Month of Goodbyes #6
I
Am the
Pink rubber ball
Smacked on the curb
Childhood
Am the
Pink rubber ball
Smacked on the curb
Childhood
Childhood
Those days
Youthful carefree summers
Spent playing without fear
Melted
Those days
Youthful carefree summers
Spent playing without fear
Melted
Melted
Memories flutter
Responsibilities grew – rose
To meet the sky
Good-bye
Memories flutter
Responsibilities grew – rose
To meet the sky
Good-bye
bounce,
resiliency
adapt, mature, run the race
until breath ceases
adapt, mature, run the race
until breath ceases
…auf
wiedersehen, adieu…
©JP/davh
haiku series with an Elfje closure:
Elegant Equations
careful
devotion
dedication to our truths
the ones we were taught
dedication to our truths
the ones we were taught
they
mattered then, when
in our younger days, counting
was part of the rule
in our younger days, counting
was part of the rule
then
considered pure
though a borrowed form, haiku
brought us calming peace
though a borrowed form, haiku
brought us calming peace
and still
now to us
in our counted days, matter;
ink in our souls runs
in our counted days, matter;
ink in our souls runs
staccato
and smooth
as our pastoral thoughts flow -
counting moons and stars…
as our pastoral thoughts flow -
counting moons and stars…
practitioners
preach
reaching new audiences
with calm devotion
reaching new audiences
with calm devotion
counting
our blessings
narrowing distances
with our own haiku
narrowing distances
with our own haiku
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Counting
ever so
gently with ease
every syllable that matters -
seventeen
ever so
gently with ease
every syllable that matters -
seventeen
(c) JP/davh
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This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until April 9th 11.59 AM (CET). I will post our new Ghost-Writer episode written by Managua, later on today. For now ... have fun and be inspired.
Interesting - we were drowned in examples and I prefer the traditional format or near to a 17 syllable version, otherwise we might drift away from other aspects of haiku and that 'moment.' I certainly found it very, very hard to do a post and it made me admire what Kristjaan does all the more!
ReplyDeleteDrowning was not the objective. Swimming and floating was - I did mention that not all the examples had to be used. I like to learn new forms; pi ku has only 8 syllables and tau ku has 16.
DeleteThank you for your participation. I cannot seem to leave comments on your site.
DeleteTrees can be magical any time of the year.
i luved Jules' 'A Month of Goodbyes #6' Bravo Jules!!!
ReplyDeleteDear Kristjaan; Yes i would like to be one of your 'ghost writers', slot me in
Have a nice Sunday
much love...
Thank you for your kindness. You are a gem Gillena!
Delete~Jules
Your admiration is well founded, Managua!
ReplyDeleteI would like to do ghostwriting, too, Kristjaan. I enjoyed this post although my brain cannot wrap itself around a new form this evening. Thanks Jules.
ReplyDeleteJust that you have read the words are enough.
DeleteMaybe a seed or two have been planted?
I know that some haiku traditionalists would prefer not to stray.
Again thank you, Jules
Thank you for reading. That is all one can ask.
DeleteAll the best ~Jules
Lovely prompt...I was a little confused for a moment...but then I remembered my Shatsu days and realized Jules was doing this prompt in the clasical Japanese manner...examples - hands-on learning..great!
ReplyDeleteThank you for comparing my examples to classical Japanese -
DeleteI only did what I thought was best.
I did have links to sites with other examples because I didn't want it to get too long - which it did anyway :)
Thanks, Jules
I always have a lot of difficulty posting comments...hopefully my last one came through.
ReplyDeleteI would have left a comment for Opie... but I do not have a facebook account.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your lovely haiku.
I like to change up the contents too. While I know nature is predominant. I like your haiku about decoding the data.