Dear haijin, visitors and travelers,
This wonderful CDHK Tanka Splendor month is running towards its end and we have still a few days to improve our Tanka writing skills. Today I have a nice prompt for you which is a nice theme for tanka. Today our prompt is meditation.
We all know what meditation is I think, so no need to explain that further. Let's go and try to create tanka with this prompt, but first I have a few haiku for you which maybe can inspire you.
dervishes whirling
seeking a higher consciousness -
third eye opens
chanting their mantra
broomstick and rake in hand
true meditation
peace of mind
lotuses reach for the sun
growing from the dark
© Chèvrefeuille
Well ... enough haiku to inspire you. I couldn't come up with something new at first, but I found a beautiful cascading haiku in my archive which I have re-worked into a tanka that fits the scene and even fits the "love" angle of tanka.
deep meditation
high up in the mountains
a Buddhist monk
even he violates chastity
watching a geisha
© Chèvrefeuille
This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until November 30th at noon (CET). I will publish our next episode, decay, later on.
!!! Soon to come a new challenging kind of kukai !!!
Share your tanka inspired on the theme for today, meditation, with us all here at our Haiku Kai, a warmhearted family of haiku and tanka poets.
1. | B i r g i t t a | 7. | gillena | 13. | David K | |
2. | Thotpurge | 8. | Xenia Tran | 14. | Dolores | |
3. | Woodsman | 9. | f o r e s t b a t h e r | 15. | rudraprayaga | |
4. | Uttley | 10. | Cressida | 16. | ladyleemanila | |
5. | Virginia Popescu | 11. | Anusha Das | |||
6. | Kim M. Russell | 12. | Paloma |
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A good topic.
ReplyDeletewaves embrace the shore
ReplyDeleteas the shore enfolds the waves
eternal balance
an affair for all to see
mindful of such commitment
A nice tanka Ken
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