Showing posts with label free style. Show all posts
Showing posts with label free style. Show all posts

Sunday, November 10, 2019

Carpe Diem #1778 Free-styling haiku ...


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at a new episode in our wonderful "Never Change A Winning Team" month in which we celebrate the beauty of haiku. I have what they call "a writer's block", so I couldn't come up with a beautiful episode today, therefore I have chosen to let you free ...

You can make your own choice of a haiku, maybe there is a special haiku that means a lot to you, or you have a favorite haiku written by a classical or non-classical haiku poet, maybe you will introduce one of your own masterpieces ... that's all possible today.

The only thing I would love to read in your post is "Why did you choose this specific haiku?" and I challenge you to create a new haiku inspired on the haiku of your choice.




This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will reain open until November 17th at noon (CET). Have fun!


Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Carpe Diem #1714 Summer Has Ended ... free styling


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

First my apologies for being late with this last episode of July 2019, I had a busy evening shift. Here it is the last episode of our Summer Love month and in this last episode you can choose your own Summer Love prompt. So this is a "free-styling" episode. Feel free to choose your prompt, feel free to create any kind of Japanese poetry and share it with us all here at our wonderful Kai.

This month was a joy to create and I hope you all did enjoy it.


End Of Summer
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until August 6th at noon (CEST). I will try to publish our first episode of August later on ... I don't have decided what theme we will have ... so that will be a surprise for us all.


Thursday, July 18, 2019

Carpe Diem #1706 Free styling with haiku and tanka ... ice cold beer


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Today I have chsen to give you the opportunity to let your inspiration flow. Awaken your muses and create your free style haiku or tanka with the prompt "ice cold beer". Here in the Netherlands we enjoy ice cold beer in Summer when it is very warm. It gives us the refreshment we need during such a warm day ... but to much "ice cold beer" leads towards other things. Sometimes drunkenness and sometimes it will come to a hot steamy night on the beach or in the garden.

Lovely ideas will come up at this moment I think ... well go for it ... free style your haiku or tanka with the given prompt.


Ice Cold Beer

This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until July 25th at noon (CEST) I will try to publish our new episode, a new weekend meditation, later on. For now ... have fun!


Wednesday, June 26, 2019

Carpe Diem #1690 Troiku Month (19) butterfly


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at a new episode in our wonderful Troiku Month. This month it's amazing to see and read all your responses on our daily task to create Troiku. Every day I give you a haiku to work with, but not today. Today I will give you the "free hand" or in other words: I only give you a theme, Butterfly, to work with. Create a haiku themed Butterfly and create a Troiku with that haiku. So a kind of free-styling.

Butterfly (photo-credit: Charlie Neibergall)

I hope you all will appreciate this episode of "free-styling".

This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until July 3rd at noon (CEST). I hope to publish our new episode later on. For now .... have fun!


Tuesday, December 11, 2018

Carpe Diem #1564 Las Vegas ... come on gamble (out of the box)


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

We are haiku-ing along the Pan American Highway, a 30.000 km long highway straight through the Americas from north to south. Yesterday we stopped at the City of Angels and today ... we will stop in ... say the opposite of Los Angeles, Las Vegas ... in the mddle of the desert were you can have a wonderful vacation and ... gambling.

Maybe you can remember our special feature "Out Of The Box" in which I challenged you all to create another kind of Japanese poetry or a different Far Eastern country like Korea for example.

Today I love to give you a "new" task. Think Out Of The Box with the themes of haiku. For example create a senryu, Cherita, Kyoka, or Sedoka. You also may "gamble" with the form by going free style. In other words ... "today it's your choice and not mine".

Las Vegas
The above image is a "still" of a time-lapse of the Las Vegas Strip. It's a nice image and I hope it will inspire you to think "Out Of The Box" ... well go for it!

This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until Dacember 18th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our new episode later on. For now ... have fun!


Sunday, January 7, 2018

Carpe Diem's Troiku Kukai "in the herb garden"



Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

It is my pleasure to invite you to the first Carpe Diem Troiku Kukai "in the herb garden". As you all know here at CDHK I create kukai on a regular base, but the last kukai "departure" has been a while ago. I even hadn't time to announce the winner of the "departure"- kukai, but I will soon publish the results of that kukai. Until than ... I already invite you to participate in a new special CDHK kukai in which I ask you to create a Troiku from a given haiku.

Troiku is a creative way of haiku-ing which I invented back in 2012 short after the start of CDHK. The goal of Troiku is to create three new haiku starting with the separated lines of a given haiku. So a Troiku has four haiku:

Russian Troika (from which I created the Troiku)

The first haiku is the haiku from which you have to start creating three new haiku. Haiku two, three and four are newly created haiku that start with the separated lines of the first haiku.
Let me try to explain that with that famous haiku by Basho:

old pond
frog jumps into
water sound

© Basho (Tr. Chèvrefeuille)

The three new haiku start with the separated lines; haiku 1 starts with the first line "old pond"; the 2nd haiku starts with the 2nd line "frog jumps into" and the 3rd haiku starts with the 3rd line "water sound". Together with the "base"-haiku the troiku counts four (4) haiku. Of course there is no use of following the classical rules, so troiku is a kind of "free-style" haiku-ing as did e.g. Santoka Taneda.
More about Troiku you can find above in the menu.

For this Carpe Diem Troiku Kukai I have chosen a haiku created by Claire Vogel Camargo. Claire granted me permission to use her haiku by the way.

Here is her haiku to start the Troiku with:

no spring sprouts
in the herb garden
his heart attack

© Claire Vogel Camargo

This Carpe Diem Troiku Kukai starts now and is open for your submissions, one troiku created from the given haiku by Claire, until January 28th 10:00 PM (CET). Send your Troiku to our email-address: carpediemhaikukai@gmail.com Please write Troiku Kukai in the subject-line.

Good Luck,

Chèvrefeuille, your host.

Friday, November 24, 2017

Carpe Diem Weekend-Meditation #8 Free Styling


!! Open for your submissions next Sunday November 26th at 7:00 PM (CET) !!

Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at a new weekend-meditation here at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. This weekend I have something new for you. This weekend-meditation has a twist in it. I will give you only a few themes to work with and you may choose your own Japanese poetry form that's why I titled it "free styling".

Here are the themes you can choose from:


first snow; autumn leaves; sunrays; 
new day rising; Santoka Taneda; 
haibun; troiku


Well ... I think you have enough choices and I hope you will find inspiration to create your Japanese poetry ... go for it ... feel free ... go free styling ... let go of the classic rules ... feel free to choose.


This "free-styling" weekend-meditation is open for your submissions next Sunday November 26th at 7:00 PM (CET) and will remain open until December 3rd at noon (CET). Have a great weekend!


Monday, July 31, 2017

Carpe Diem #1229 Yin & Yang


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at the first episode of a new month full of challenging prompts to inspire you to create Japanese poetry like haiku and tanka. As I do every month I have chosen a new theme for the prompts. This month we will explore modern art.

Modern art includes artistic work produced during the period extending roughly from the 1860s to the 1970s, and denotes the style and philosophy of the art produced during that era. The term is usually associated with art in which the traditions of the past have been thrown aside in a spirit of experimentation.

Isn't that we are doing with haiku? As I discovered haiku back in the eighties I wrote longer poems and stories, I used a lot of words to tell the stories and had the feeling that I said nothing. Than there was haiku ... a very short poem originating from Japan. As I started reading haiku, and for sure that wasn't easy, I immediately was caught. These short poems told a lot about a short moment in the life of the poet with maybe 10 to 15 words and those scenes were really awesome. If I had to describe that scene I would need for sure more than 15 words ... In other words ... haiku experiments with
words to tell a lot ... that is ... in my opinion modern art.

logo August 2017
The above logo is my choice for August and you can find this same modern art painting on the background of our Kai this month. It's an abstract oil painting on canvas produced by everfun.com visit their website and see what they have more (click on the caption under the above logo).

This month it's not only about haiku or tanka, but it is about modern art in all its different appearances.

Our first prompt for this month fits our haiku in a great way because of its spiritual meaning. Today I love to challenge you to create haiku inspired on a sculpture by Joel Shapses. He introduces himself to you:

Joel Shapses
As an Award winning sculptor my works are prominently displayed in private collections and public venues throughout North and South America. The more, avant garde statements that are made in the mixture of neon, led lights, metal, fused glass and stone media to elicit an excitement that occurs when the artist takes a quantum leap toward ingenuity. Whether realistic or abstract, the viewer's tactile senses are aroused with almost a sense of urgency to explore each form in greater depth than just visually. Born in New Jersey, Have spent most of my life on the Eastern coast of the U.S. Having an inherent artistic gift, I began sculpting in a primitive way at the age of five. Early on in my sculpting career, I worked under the same roof as famed sculptor Enzo Gallo. From a period of over the fifty years I have exhibited in many shows and has won over seventy awards and recognitions and have completed over six hundred works of art.

A wonderful artist I would say and it is one of his sculptures that is featured on our first day of August 2017. The sculpture is titled "Yin Yang" and that's our prompt for today. What does Yin Yang mean? Let me tell you that, but I think that the most of you know what it means.

Yin and Yang
Yin and Yang

Yin and yang is a complex, relational concept in Chinese culture that has developed over thousands of years. Briefly put, yin and yang represent the two opposite principles observed in nature.

Generally speaking, yin is characterized as feminine, still, dark, negative, and an inward energy. On the other hand, yang is characterized as masculine, energetic, hot, bright, positive, and an outward energy.

Yin and yang elements come in pairs, such as the moon and the sun, female and male, dark and bright, cold and hot, passive and active, and so on.

But it is important to note that yin and yang are not static or mutually exclusive terms. The nature of yin yang lies in the interchange and interplay of the two components. The alternation of day and night is such an example. While the world is composed of many different, sometimes opposing, forces, these forces still coexist and even complement each other. Sometimes, forces opposite in nature even rely on each other to exist. For example, there cannot be a shadow without light.

The balance of yin and yang is important. If yin is stronger, yang will be weaker, and vice versa. Yin and yang can interchange under certain conditions so they are usually not yin and yang alone. In other words, yin elements can contain certain parts of yang, and yang can have some components of yin.

It is believed that this balance of yin and yang exists in everything.

Yin and Yang ... a hidden part of haiku maybe, because we can see this balance, the existence of this balance, in all and everything ... and therefore also in haiku. Isn't that what haiku is? Haiku is about nature and humans as part of nature that brings the balance between humans and nature ...

Yin Yang by Joel Shapses
Well ... a lot to think about I would say ... so I will give you more time to respond instead of five (5) days you can now respond within seven (7) days. I am looking forward to this month because I love to bring modern art more to the attention of the world and maybe through CDHK's month August 2017 that will happen.

balance
black and white together
as one

© Chèvrefeuille

Not as strong as I had hoped, but it is a haiku in the modern way, because that's the other challenge this month try to create your haiku, tanka or other Japanese poetry form in a modern way as did for example Santoka Taneda. (See our promptlist for August 2017 above in the menu)

This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7:00 PM (CET) and will remain open until August 7th at noon (CET). Have fun.


Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #62 Troiku


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

What a joy to present you an all new episode of our special feature Tokubetsudesu. This time I love to challenge you to write a troiku.

Troiku is a haiku form which I have invented and I will give a brief description of this way of writing haiku. Troiku is a compound word which I distilled from the Russian sleigh "troika" and the Japanese poetry form "haiku".
The goal is to write a haiku (the sleigh) and to write three new haiku (the horses) by using the three lines of the haiku (the sleigh). I will give an example:

 
In the above troiku "Old Pond" is the famous "frog pond" haiku by Basho "the sleigh". The "horses" in the right of the image are based on the separate lines of that haiku by Basho. "Horse 1" starts with the first line; "horse 2" starts with the second line and "horse 3" starts with the third line.
The complete four stanza are called troiku. More about this Troiku you can read in the article mentioned in the above menu or by clicking HERE.

Credits: Troika

The challenge of this Tokubetsudesu episode is clear I think ... you have to create/compose a Troiku.

Here is a new Troiku written by myself. This troiku is inspired on one of the Tarot cards, part of the Great Arcana, The Hermit (IX). More about The Hermit (IX) you can read HERE.


Here is my Troiku "seeking knowledge":


seeking knowledge
getting deeper insight
hermit’s choice
seeking knowledge
contemplating under the Bodhi Tree
like Buddha

getting deeper insight
while listening to the silence
the sound of rain

hermit’s choice
seeking refuge high up in the mountains
closer to the gods
 
© Chèvrefeuille
Well .... I hope you did like this Tokubetsudesu episode and I hope you will try to create/compose a Troiku. I am looking forward to your responses and I hope those responses are many ...

This CD Tokubetsudesu episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until September 25th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our next episode, a new CD Special themed Autumn, later on. For now ... have fun!


Tuesday, April 7, 2015

Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #42, 5-7-5 not easy


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

As I was preparing yesterday's post I ran through older posts and I encountered a question by Birgitta of Crazy Art - Photo and Poetry. She asked that question a while ago and I had promised to write a post about it. Until today it had slipt my attention, but today I will try to fulfill my promise. Birgitta her question was about the 5-7-5 syllables rule of haiku. This will not be an easy post, because (as you all know), I am not a fan of the 5-7-5 syllables.

In ancient Japan the common rule was to write haiku in one line (mostly vertical) which was cut in three parts. Every "part" followed the idea of 5-7-5 "onji" or "sound-units". Japanese is a wonderful language which is based on sound as I have explained in our Haiku Writing Techniques chapter 2 "onomatopoeia". a Haiku Writing Technique which is especially for languages based on sounds.

As haiku became more known in the western world we have sought for the right way to translate the Japanese haiku in to our western languages, but the most western languages aren't based on sounds. So western scholars choose to follow the 5-7-5 onji rule by translating it into 5-7-5 syllables, however that made it almost impossible for several languages (including e.g. Dutch). In that time as we westerners started to translate first and later wrote our own haiku the most haiku following the 5-7-5 syllables became artificial, and were called "counted verses".




Every language has its own rules for syllables. In English the rules for syllables are different than e.g. in Dutch or Swedish ... so it's not easy to use the 5-7-5 syllables rule. Several scholars, e.g. Jane Reichhold, introduced the alternative way of composing haiku by bringing up the idea of "a haiku is a poem with three lines following the sequence short-long-short. Others started to bring another way of counting syllables e.g. 3-5-3 syllables, which is more easy to compose.

As you all know I am not a fan of the strict syllables count mostly because of the idea that it is to structured for me and gives to less freedom to compose my haiku ... and becoming artificial. There are several haiku poets of our times who started with that 5-7-5 idea, but during their growth as a haiku poet they more and more got rid of the 5-7-5 rule.
To start with haiku it's ok to use that 5-7-5 rule, but try to loose it after a while, more or less syllables will not harm your haiku ... and it gives you more freedom to compose haiku from your heart. In my opinion using the 5-7-5 rule is really artificial and more with your mind, your brain, and I think poetry has nothing to do with artificiality or your brain. Maybe this is a pure western thought, but I think we, westerners, have re-formed haiku to our western way of thinking, living and so on.

I think we have to let go the 5-7-5 rule and have to try writing haiku as westerners. It's not a "sin" if you don't use the 5-7-5 rule, it's more a blessing to become free of that rule .... it makes haiku (in my opinion) even better and stronger.
Of course that choice is yours. If you love to write your haiku in the 5-7-5 sequence .... than feel free to do so, but it is no obligation. Maybe writing haiku in the 5-7-5 way is a new challenge, to me it is for sure a challenge and not only because of my ideas about, but also because of the fact that I am not familiar enough with the syllables-rules in English.

This was our GW-post for this week and I have a challenge for you all .... Try to write a haiku with the above mentioned 3-5-3 syllables option, a haiku with the 5-7-5 syllables option and a third haiku in the "free-style" as we saw e.g. in the haiku by Santoka Taneda.




Here are my three haiku:

sunflowers
stretch out to the summer sky -
a dog barks

© Chèvrefeuille

As I "count" the syllables of the second line following the Dutch rules, than that line has 7 syllables, but in English the syllables-count is 5 ...

Now I will try to write a haiku following the classical count of 5-7-5 syllables, an oldie:

finally dreams become true
just one peaceful spring night -
blossoms of cherry bloom

© Chèvrefeuille

And finally I will try to write a haiku in the "free-style":

at sunrise
poppies still redder
sacrifice for God

© Chèvrefeuille

Well ... I hope this GW-post has given you all an idea of the 5-7-5 rule and I hope to read wonderful haiku written by you all in response on this GW-post.

This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until April 10th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our new episode, the second CD Special by Kala Ramesh, later on.

Monday, March 9, 2015

Carpe Diem Special #136, Santoka Taneda's "there is Buddha"


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

As you all know this month we have Santoka Taneda (1882-1940) as our featured haiku poet and I think you remember our last Haiku Writing Techniques episode "free style" and that's what we are going to do again with this CD-Special.

Santoka Taneda (or Taneda Santoka, both ways are used) wrote a lot of haiku, not only as we know them, but he also wrote several haiku with the "sound of Zen" in it and our CD-Special of today is such a haiku with the "sound of Zen":

in the ceaseless sound
of the water
there is Buddha


© Santoka Taneda

Credits: brook
I think this haiku is a true Zen haiku and it's full of the "sound of Zen" in my opinion and not only based on the name of Buddha in it ... the sound of the water ... always there ... without taking a pause. Even in winter you can hear the sound of water when it's frozen ...
Haiku poets are one with nature and as you all know Buddha was one with nature too ... so that makes us all Buddha ...

The goal of this CD-Special is to write/compose an all new haiku in the same sense, tone and spirit as the one given ... and because Santoka Taneda was a fore stander of the 'free-style' haiku you don't need to count syllables or use kigo or one of the other "classical rules" of haiku. Maybe that makes it easier, but I am not sure of that.

Here is my attempt:

drip, drip
the sound of water
kitchen sink


© Chèvrefeuille

This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and it will remain open until March 12th at noon (CET). I will (try to) publish our next episode, a new Haiku Writing Techniques, later on. For now .... have fun!
!! PS. I am hopelessly behind with commenting. I hope to catch up a.s.a.p. !!!