Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new episode of our wonderful Kai were we are celebrating autumn as you can read in the theme "the leaves are falling". Today I have chosen to challenge you with a new "Renga With Basho ...". As you all know I see him as my sensei and I am honored that I may give you the opportunity to create renga with my sensei. You can choose your own "line-up" and of course your own "hokku" (starting verse). You have to add your two-lined stanza of approximately 14 syllables. Please try to "close the chain" by creating an "ageku" (closing verse) that associates with the "hokku".
|Lactarius Hatsudake (Photo © Ruben Walleyn)|
Here are the six haiku to use:
not yet that many days
of autumn dew
with its ragged top it's
like a pine tree
moon past full
the beginning of a little more
in the daytime a lock lowered
on the gate **
bloom at the stonemason's
|Glistening Dew (image found on Pinterest)|
not spilling from bush clover
still it sways
© Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold, taken from "Basho, The Complete Haiku")
* The mushroom here is the Lactarius Hatsudake it bleeds a reddish liquid that changes into green when broken. In spite of this spooky attribute, the mushroom is edible. One does not know from the poem whether the autumn dew that Basho mentions is actual dew or this fluid.
** Remarks on Closing The Gate: "... if anyone comes, I have to make unnecessary talk. If I go out to visit anyone, I feel bad for disturbing him. I should be content without any friends. I should feel wealthy in spite of my poverty. A fifty-year-old man writes this for himself as precept for his edification".
Six wonderful haiku I think. Full of intensity and beauty. A real joy to work with I think and I am looking forward to all your beautiful responses. By the way ... I love to create a new exclusive CDHK E-book in which I will gather all your wonderful renga created with Basho. I hope you all will be okay with that.
|Cover of our new exclusive CDHK E-book "still it sways" renga with the master|
This episode is NOW OPEN for your responses and will remain open until December 5th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our new episode later on. For now ... have fun!
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