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Showing posts with label late-spring. Show all posts
Showing posts with label late-spring. Show all posts
Thursday, July 9, 2015
On The Trail With Basho Encore #8 plowing a field
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
It is time for an all new episode of "Encore" in which I share haiku by Basho, my haiku master, to challenge you to write an all new haiku inspired on the one I gave. Of course I will try to write an all new haiku in the same sense, tone and spirit as the one given.
Basho was also a tanka poet although there are no tanka of him published. He is known by his haiku, but uses also tanka techniques in his haiku.
In the following haiku he uses words that are usually in tanka as we will see in the preface and comment by Jane Reichhold.
hatake utsu oto ya arashi no sakura asa
plowing a field
the sound of a violent storm
morning blossoms
(c) Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
With this haiku came a preface, as was very common use:
'On March 11, at the shrine of Shirahige in Araki village'. Usually in tamka the words 'arashi' (a violent storm) and 'sakura' (cherry blossoms) are combined in the fear that the blossoms will be blown down in a storm. So the 'wit' here is to combine these words with another (much more common) meaning.
The Japanese were very anxious as the wind blows while all the delicate blossoms are in full bloom. The Japanese are entwined with nature and when nature is in danger, the Japanese are experiencing the pain of nature their selves.
The delicate blossoms of the cherry trees and plum trees are famous for haiku, so I think that I will try a new haiku with one of these famous kigo (season word).
the spring storm
torns apart the delicacy
of cherry blossom
(c) Chèvrefeuille
For the Japanese this haiku is painful. As we know they are entwined with nature, but also a late spring storm that torns apart the delicate cherry blossoms is part of nature and ... when the blossoms have left with the wind they can grow those delicious cherries in summer.
Alright ... I will give a few new haiku on the delicacy of the blossoms. I was inspired.
do not scatter
the lovely cherry blossoms
oh violent storm
so fragile
the white plum blossoms
in the evening sun
Ah! that fragrance
delicate cherry blossoms
in the spring rain
(c) Chèvrefeuille
Well ... this time no long episode, but I hope you did like it and that it will inspire you to write an all new haiku or tanka.
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until July 16th at noon (CET) Have fun!
Location:
Nederland
Thursday, March 28, 2013
Carpe Diem #157, Tanpopo (Dandelion)
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
As I am preparing this episode the sun shines, it's cold, but not that cold anymore as we had the last week. The Eastern wind has become less hard and that makes that the temperature is better, still to cold for the time of the year, but ... well ... I will not complain, I like this dry cold weather very much.
Today we share haiku on Tanpopo (Dandelion). I had to sought out the Internet because I didn't know what 'Dandelion' was. I found the following background on 'Dandelion':
| Dandelion |
Taraxacum
(pron.: /təˈræksəkʉm/) is a large genus of flowering plants in the family
Asteraceae. They are native to Eurasia and North and South America, and two
species, T. officinale and T. erythrospermum, are found as weeds worldwide. Both species are edible in their entirety. The common name dandelion (/ˈdændɨlaɪ.ən/
dan-di-ly-ən, from French dent-de-lion, meaning "lion's tooth") is
given to members of the genus, and like other members of the Asteraceae family,
they have very small flowers collected together into a composite flower head.
Each single flower in a head is called a floret. Many Taraxacum species produce
seeds asexually by apomixis, where the seeds are produced without pollination,
resulting in offspring that are genetically identical to the parent plant.
The species
of Taraxacum are tap-rooted biennial or perennial herbaceous plants, native to
temperate areas of the Old and New worlds.[clarification needed]
The leaves
are 5–25 cm long or longer, simple and basal, entire or lobed, forming a
rosette above the central taproot. The flower heads are yellow to orange
coloured, and are open in the daytime but closed at night. The heads are borne
singly on a hollow stem (scape) that rises 1–10 cm or more above the leaves and
exudes a milky latex when broken. A rosette may produce several flowering stems
at a time. The flower heads are 2–5 cm in diameter and consist entirely of ray
florets. The flower heads mature into spherical seed heads called
"blowballs" or "clocks" (in both British and American
English) containing many single-seeded fruits called achenes. Each achene is
attached to a pappus of fine hairs, which enable wind-aided dispersal over long
distances.
The flower
head is surrounded by bracts (sometimes mistakenly called sepals) in two
series. The inner bracts are erect until the seeds mature, then flex downward
to allow the seeds to disperse; the outer bracts are always reflexed downward.
Some species drop the "parachute" from the achenes; the hair-like
parachutes are called pappus, and they are modified sepals. Between the pappus
and the achene, there is a stalk called a beak, which elongates as the fruit
matures. The beak breaks off from the achene quite easily, separating the seed
from the parachute.
Seeds being
dispersed from a Taraxacum seedhead by air currents
A number of
species of Taraxacum are seed dispersed ruderals that rapidly colonize
disturbed soil, especially the common dandelion (T. officinale), which has been
introduced over much of the temperate world. After flowering is finished, the
dandelion flower head dries out for a day or two. The dried petals and stamens
drop off, the bracts reflex (curve backwards), and the parachute ball opens
into a full sphere. Finally, the seed-bearing parachutes expand and lift out of
it. The parachute drops off the achene when it strikes an obstacle.[citation
needed] After the seed is released, the parachutes lose their feathered
structure and take on a fuzzy, cotton-like appearance, often called
"dandelion snow".
| Dandelion seeds |
In Dutch we call the 'Dandelion' "Paardebloem", in a free translation that would be 'horse-flower'. It's very common in my country and at the end of Spring, (Tanpopo (Dandelion) is a kigo (seasonword) for late-spring, you can find it everywhere. My grandchildren are enjoying Dandelions very much as they are loosing their color and the seeds are seen. They love to blow against the seeds and when they are loosening the stem that's one big party for them. It's a lovely sight as they're blowing against these seeds and their laughter is filling the air. Really I enjoy that sight.
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| Dandelion seeds dispersal |
I found a nice haiku about Dandelions, but I couldn't retrieve the poet. So if you are the poet of this haiku, please let me know. Until than 'thank you for your kindness that I may use this haiku.
White and
full of life
The sun gleams it's liveliness
Live on through the wind
The sun gleams it's liveliness
Live on through the wind
I like this haiku (it's not one of mine by the way) very much and it inspired me to write my own haiku on Dandelion. (Today I have chosen to use the classical way of writing haiku ... so a one line haiku.)
on the banks of the stream as far as I can see a yellow sea of flowers
Another one, now written in the Western way (three lines):
walking through the meadow
seeds of Dandelions airborn -
to another place
seeds of Dandelions airborn -
to another place
'look granddad!'
my youngest grandson plucks Dandelions
blowing against the seeds
blowing against the seeds
my grandson helps the Dandelion
to spread out
blowing against the seeds
blowing against the seeds
my grandson helps the Dandelion
to spread out
Aren't they wonderful? I loved writing these haiku and enjoyed preparing this episode of Carpe Diem. I hope that you are inspired and I am looking forward to all of your nice posts on Tanpopo (Danelions).
This prompt will stay on 'til March 30th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post our new episode of Carpe Diem later on today around 10.00 PM (CET). That will be our last Carpe Diem Special by Onitsura this month. I love to share that Special haiku by Onitsura hereafter.
suzukaze ya koku ni michite matsu no koe
suzukaze ya koku ni michite matsu no koe
the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine-tree
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine-tree
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
classical kigo,
Dandelion,
late-spring
Location:
Nederland
Tuesday, March 26, 2013
Carpe Diem #155, Oborozuki (hazy moon)
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Today it's Full Worm Moon, that's the name of the full moon of March. I have sought on the Internet for the name and meaning of this moon and I found this:
Full Worm
Moon – March As the temperature begins to warm and the ground begins to thaw,
earthworm casts appear, heralding the return of the robins. The more northern
tribes knew this Moon as the Full Crow Moon, when the cawing of crows signaled
the end of winter; or the Full Crust Moon, because the snow cover becomes
crusted from thawing by day and freezing at night. The Full Sap Moon, marking
the time of tapping maple trees, is another variation. To the settlers, it was
also known as the Lenten Moon, and was considered to be the last full Moon of
winter.
That last name 'Lenten Moon', sounds familiar to me, because we are now in the 60 days before Easter, and that period is called 'Lent' or 'Lenten'. And yes it's the last moon of Winter. At least to me, because in my eyes when Easter has come, Spring has really started.
That last name 'Lenten Moon', sounds familiar to me, because we are now in the 60 days before Easter, and that period is called 'Lent' or 'Lenten'. And yes it's the last moon of Winter. At least to me, because in my eyes when Easter has come, Spring has really started.
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| Credits: Hazy Moon with Cherry Blossom |
Today we aren't sharing haiku on the full moon by the way, but on Oborozuki (Hazy Moon), because that's a kigo for late-spring.
So let's do some haiku composing on Oborozuki (Hazy Moon).
hazy moon
cherry blossoms look mysterious -
the Spring breeze
cherry blossoms look mysterious -
the Spring breeze
Have fun, be inspired and share your haiku with our community. This prompt will stay on 'til March 28th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post our new episode of Carpe Diem later on today around 10.00 PM (CET). Our new prompt than will be Tako (kite).
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
cherry blossom,
classical kigo,
haiku,
late-spring
Location:
Nederland
Carpe Diem #154, Shuntoo (Spring lantern)
Dear Haijin, visitors, travelers,
This month is almost over. We have still a few days to go in this all classical Japanese kigo month. I have read wonderful haiku the last few days, but I am also a bit behind with commenting on all of your lovely posts. I hope to catch up, but please don't be sad if I haven't commented yet on your posts.
Today we share haiku on Shuntoo (Spring lantern). The first thing what came in mind was the Autumn lantern. When the evenings start earlier, nights getting longer, its time to get out the lamps (consider you have no electricity in the Edo period).
It is a time for huddeling together and become quiet looking in a candle light.
It is also a time to sit in peace and read a good book under the lamp light.But we are busy with Spring kigo and than the meaning of Shuntoo (Spring lantern) is a more pleasant thing, with evenings getting shorter. It's also a time to huddeling together and look at the sunset when the evenings becoming longer. Sitting on the terrace or the porch together with your loved ones. When the evening goes on and the sunlight becomes less, the shadows become longer and we enter the 'twilight', lighting the candles or lamps. Shadows on the wall dancing in the candlelight ... wow what a spooky, but also romantic thought.
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| Credits: Japanese Lantern (Edo period) |
I have found a nice haiku written by Issa on Spring Lantern:
chôchin de tabako fuku nari haru no kaze
smoking a pipe
by lantern light...
spring breeze
by lantern light...
spring breeze
A wonderful haiku I think. Very well ... let's do some haiku composing myself.
on the verandah
in the light of a Spring lantern
writing haiku
writing haiku
inspired on the wonderful sunset
a Spring evening
a Spring evening
on the porch with my beloved ones -
the sound of frogs
the sound of frogs
resonates through the Spring night
young leaves rustle
on the verandah
in the light of a Spring lantern
writing haiku
writing haiku
inspired on the wonderful sunset
a Spring evening
a Spring evening
on the porch with my beloved ones -
the sound of frogs
the sound of frogs
resonates through the Spring night
young leaves rustle
young leaves rustle -
lighting sweet scented candles
on the verandah
lighting sweet scented candles
on the verandah
Well ... I was on a role as you can see. I like this prompt a lot and I was inspired. I hope that you all, my dear haijin, visitors and travelers, are inspired as well to write haiku on Shuntoo. This prompt will stay on 'til March 27th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post our new episode, Oborozuki (hazy moon), later on today around 10.00 PM (CET). I hope to be on time, but if not my excuses there for. I am in the nightshift and so I will maybe not be able to post on time. Just as I did today. Sorry for this late post.
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
cascading haiku,
classical kigo,
haiku,
late-spring,
Shuntoo,
spring lantern
Location:
Nederland
Saturday, March 23, 2013
Carpe Diem Special #28, Onitsura's Cherry-Flowers
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
While on our way to the end of this Carpe Diem month with Spring kigo I have found a wonderful haiku written by our special haiku master Onitsura on Cherry-flowers. It's in a way a different kind of haiku written by him, but it still is a gorgeous verse.
Onitsura (1660-1738) was a contemporary of Basho (1644-1694) and he tried to follow in Basho's footsteps with his haiku. So sometimes his haiku are very similar with those of Basho, but always you can read Onitsura's Spirit in it. Feels somewhat like my own way of 'revisiting Basho's haiku' as you can find on one of my other blogs Basho Revisited were I look closer to haiku written by Basho and write one (trying to write one) in Basho's spirit.
saku-karani miru-karani hana no chiru-karani
the cherry-flowers bloom;
we gaze at them;
they fall, and ...
(c) Onitsura
R.H. Blyth, a wellknown haiku entrepeneur, commented in his Haiku Volume 2 Spring on this haiku the following:
[...] There is nothing beyond what is said here, in spite of the "and ..." Pilate asked Christ, "What is truth?" The answer is given here. The answer is,
The cherry-flowers bloom;
We gaze at them;
They fall, and ...
This "and ..." is the human element in Nature. It is the peasant or sage somewhere visible in a Chinese landscape. [...]
What a comment don't you think too? This haiku by Onitsura could have been written for Easter and we are approaching Easter as you may know. So this Special is quit nice for the time of year.
Well ... let me see if I can write a whole new haiku inspired on this one by Onitsura and I hope to catch his Spirit in it. I think it will not be easy, but I have to try of course (smiles).
just like that
cherry blossom petals fall -
a colorful shower
a colorful shower
walking beneath the cherry trees
while cherry petals fall
while cherry petals fall
a haiku by Onitsura comes in mind
just like that
Awesome! I love it when a haiku feels good. I like this cascading style very much, but (as you maybe know) I have created a new haiku form: Troiku (You can find a post on that new form HERE) and I love to share a Troiku with you all based on the haiku by Onitsura.
(The Sleigh):
the cherry-flowers bloom
we gaze at them
they fall, and ...
(Horse 1):
the cherry-flowers bloom
finally King Winter has gone
Ah! What a feast
(Horse 2):
we gaze at them
weeping in joyful honor -
cherry trees bloom
(Horse 3):
they fall, and ...
the promise of given fruits
in late Summer
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| Credits: Cherries |
Isn't it a wonderful way to explore your creativity with haiku? This "Troiku" has become a nice one, as I may say so.
Have fun, be inspired and share your haiku (or maybe a Troiku) with us all here on Carpe Diem. This prompt will stay on 'til March 25th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post our new episode, Haru ta (Spring paddy fields), later on today around 10.00 PM (CET).
Labels:
Carpe Diem Special,
cascading haiku,
cherry blossom,
haiku,
late-spring,
Onitsura,
Sakura,
troiku
Location:
Nederland
Friday, March 22, 2013
Carpe Diem #152, Hanagumori (Blossom Haze)
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
We are busy with Late-Spring kigo, so the posts are all written as meant to be somewhere in June. Spring is almost over. I am already yearning for Summer, but we have to go a few days in this month of Carpe Diem. As I look back today to all those wonderful prompts we have had 'til now this month than I am happy. I have read wonderful haiku and have seen new contributors to our daily haiku meme, but also I saw a growing group of travelers by which are posting anonymous comments, mostly spammers and that makes me a bit sad. So I have to be stricter with my rules and that, my dear friends, visitors and travelers, isn't my kind of being.
Here are the rules:
- If you post a haiku please share a comment on the post (of course if you like to comment)
- Don't comment ANONYMOUS, every anonymous comment will be seen as SPAM and will be removed
- As you post a haiku, please take care of the right URL to your post
- Enjoy reading the posts
- Enjoy writing haiku and sharing them with us
- Haiku writing and composing has to be fun and not an obligation
It's sad that I have to do this, but I have to. As I always say "read the rules and than forget them" is also here with these rules, but I will make a page for these rules so they are always there to read again. Sorry for this dear friends, but .... well I can't do otherwise.
OK ... back to our prompt for today. Our kigo now are all of late -spring and so this one also is of late-spring, Hanagumori (Blossom Haze). What does this kigo tell us?
It's telling us that all blossoming trees are in full bloom and the view is like a haze, sometimes as mist occurs it gives the blossoms a magical, mysterious look.
Hanagumori is especially a kigo for cherry blossoms and so our haiku inspired on this kigo has to be about cherry blossoms, but as you know, rules you have to read once and than let them go. Feel free to compose your haiku without rules. So if you don't can write a haiku about cherry blossoms? Well ... all other blossom or flower or plant can be used of course (smiles).
I think this one isn't easy, but that makes it a challenge.
I found a wonderful haiku on Hamagumori (Blossom Haze) written by Narayanan Raghunathan, one of the co-founders of Wonder Haiku Worlds which I love to share here with you:
old man and woman
walk into the twilight sky -
blossom haze
(c) Narayanan Raghunathan
Or this one written by Michael Henry Lee:
blossom haze -
even the plum tree knows
when to let go
(c) Michael Henry Lee
As you can read these two are very different and not especially written about cherry blossom, so follow in their footsteps and enjoy just composing haiku right from your heart ... as I do.
blossom haze -
walking in the middle
of falling petals
Ah! those cherries
have to let go their blossoms -
blossom haze
Hm ... I like these two I hadn't thought that I could write/compose a haiku on this prompt, but it looks like I did it.
Well ... have fun, be inspired and share your haiku with our haiku community here on Carpe Diem. This prompt will stay on 'til March 24th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post our new episode, a Special by Onitsura, later on today around 10.00 PM (CET).
The new Carpe Diem Special haiku by Onitsura (1660-1738) is the following haiku:
saku-karani miru-karani hana no chiru-karani
the cherry-flowers bloom;
we gaze at them;
they fall, and ...
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
cherry blossom,
classical kigo,
haiku,
late-spring
Location:
Nederland
Thursday, March 21, 2013
Carpe Diem #151, Haru Fukashi (deep Spring)
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
As I am preparing this episode outside it feels really like Spring. The sun is shining, a few Forsythia flowers blooming, nice temperature, almost no wind and I have been in the garden to drink my coffee. Really it feels like Spring ... awesome!
Today another late-Spring kigo, Haru Fukashi (deep Spring), is on. Deep Spring ... spring runs to it's end and the most trees, bushes and weeds are wonderfully green ... the sun has become warmer and the longing for Summer starts being in my bones. Spring was great ... all those wonderful flowers, like Narcissus and Tulips and those blossoming trees, Plum tree, Cherry tree and not to forget the Magnolia. Nature has become completely new. Mother Nature has her nicest robe on ... Spring ... ah what a wonderful season.
I found a nice haiku on this kigo. It's written by Narayanan Raghunathan, one of the founders of Wonder Haiku Worlds , a website about haiku and other Japanese poetry forms. He wrote this on in 2010.
golden dawn -
deep spring mountain
shivers in breeze
(c) 2010 - Narayanan Raghunathan
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| Credits: Deep Spring (This is really a wonderful website). |
I wonder if I can write haiku on Deep Spring?
everywhere I look
nature is in full bloom -
deep Spring
deep Spring
I already can feel Summer -
walking along the beach
walking along the beach
the russtling of the dune grasses
deep Spring
Not a strong cascading, but I loved writing and composing it. Have fun, be creative and share your haiku with us all here on Carpe Diem ... where you just have to enjoy composing haiku without strict rules.
This prompt will stay on 'till March 23th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post our next episode, Hanagumori (blossom haze), later on today around 10.00 PM (CET)
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
classical kigo,
haiku,
late-spring,
spring
Location:
Nederland
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