Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Today we have here in The Netherlands the second day of Christmas, December 27th, and we have the first snow of this winter. It's a bit sad that the snow starts to fall after Christmas. Well it doesn't matter, because we are still in the mood of Christmas and I love to bring to you all another nice Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge. This week's TR challenge is started with a haiku written by Jen (or Paloma) of Blog It Or Lose It. She wrote this haiku in response on our Mountain Cabin prompt and I was immediately "in love" with this (in my opinion) gorgeous haiku, maybe the background information Jen shared had to do with that too.
ancient
laughter
captured in a canyon wind –
yucca leaves, rustling
© Jen of Blog It Or Lose It
She shared also a few wonderful photos of Walnut Canyon, one of them I will re-produce here:
captured in a canyon wind –
yucca leaves, rustling
She shared also a few wonderful photos of Walnut Canyon, one of them I will re-produce here:
Credits: Walnut Canyon |
So here is my attempt to write a second stanza towards this one, that second stanza counts 7-7 syllables, but that's not neccessary to use ... feel free to do as you like ...
ancient laughter
captured in a canyon wind –
yucca leaves, rustling (© Paloma)
whispering of ghostly voices
telling a wonderful story (© Chèvrefeuille)
This episode of our Tan Renga Challenge is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until next Friday, January 2nd at noon (CET). Have fun ... be inspired and share your continuation of this Tan Renga with us all.
Beautiful haiku from Jen, that one.
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear Pirate :)
DeleteLove this haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks Petru --
DeleteI love how you wove mythology into your response -- :)
Jen, a warm message
ReplyDeleteThanks Moonie :)
DeleteAll the best to you --
Very honored that you used my hokku for this challenge, Kristjaan --- and I love your response, too. This historic site is so full of echoes and tales and voices -- you've captured the feeling well : )
ReplyDeleteAll the best to you ---