Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
What a joy ... today I may share a post about one of my favorite themes in haiku (and recently tanka), Cherry Blossom (Sakura).
As you maybe know I have an old Sakura in the backyard and I am proud of it. Every late winter and early spring I am observing it and every time again as I see the first cherry blossoms I am happy. That day is a day to celebrate and I love it every year again.
In our CDHK library you can find an e-book titled "fragile beauty" in which I have gathered a lot of my cherry blossom haiku and (I think) it is a wonderful e-book to read and to inspire you.
My Sakura 2013 (photo © Chèvrefeuille) |
Here are a few haiku crafted by Basho (1644-1694) about Cherry Blossoms. Maybe you know them, for sure that last one you know I think, because that haiku is an example of Basho's karumi-style his live's goal challenge.
from among the peach trees
blooming everywhere,
the first cherry blossoms.
a lovely spring night
suddenly vanished while we
viewed cherry blossoms
from every direction
cherry blossom petals blow
into Lake Biwa
from all these trees –
in salads, soups, everywhere –
cherry blossoms fall
© Basho
Cherry Blossoms (photo found on Pinterest) |
Cherry Blossoms so fragile but so beautiful. A rich source for haiku (and tanka) I think this episode can give you enough inspiration and joy. So have fun!
I have created an all new haiku for this episode and I have tried to create it the classical way:
on a gust of wind
the cherry blossoms dance through the streets
in praise of the Creator
the cherry blossoms dance through the streets
in praise of the Creator
© Chèvrefeuille
Is this a classical haiku? Let me take a closer look:
5-7-5 syllables check
a short moment check
a kigo check (cherry blossom)
a kireji check (after the first line)
a short moment check
a kigo check (cherry blossom)
a kireji check (after the first line)
interchangeable first and third line check
in praise of the Creator
the cherry blossoms dance through the streets
on a gust of wind
in praise of the Creator
the cherry blossoms dance through the streets
on a gust of wind
And last, but not least, a deeper meaning check (Creator, but also wind, the wind is the messenger of the gods)
Well ... I hope you did like this new episode and I hope I have inspired you to create haiku or tanka with this classical kigo, cherry blossom.
!! I am behind with commenting, but I will visit you all a.s.a.p. !!!
!! I am behind with commenting, but I will visit you all a.s.a.p. !!!
This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until April 24th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our new "weekend-meditation", a new episode of Universal Jane, later on. For now ... enjoy!
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