Thursday, November 21, 2013

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month # XXII, The Inner Zone's "sheets of waves cover''


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Today the haiku to start the Tan Renga with is written by ''the Inner zone'' of ''The pigments of life'' and is written in response of one of our Kamishibai episodes "lighthouse''. She/he wrote only a haiku, but it was really a nice haiku. And I think that you can write a wonderful second stanza towards this Tan Renga.
Here follows the first stanza of our new Tan Renga Challenge:

sheets of waves cover
asleep sea, lighthouse rotates
sparkling lullabies

(c) The Inner Zone

Roker Lighthouse

And here is my attempt to complete this Tan Renga:

sheets of waves cover
asleep sea, lighthouse rotates
sparkling lullabies
                                                  (The Inner Zone)

waves thunder and break
against the foot of the lighthouse
                             (Chèvrefeuille)

And now it's up to you my dear Haijin, visitors and travelers to complete this Tan Renga in your own unique way. This episode of our Tan Renga Challenge Month will stay on until November 24th 11.59 AM (CET) and is open for your submissions later on today around 7.00 PM (CET). So ... have fun, be inspired and share.


7 comments:

  1. another beautiful inspiration Kristjaan

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  2. most fitting completion ~ well penned ~ enjoy the weekend ~ carol, xxx

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  3. I hope that foot is planted squarely on firm ground.

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  4. Much too difficult for me, so I'm sitting this one out. See you all the next time around!

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  5. that is a powerful finish ☺

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