Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new episode of our wonderful Kai were we are having our 3rd edition of our special feature TRC, or Tan Renga Challenge. This month I challenge you to create Tan Renga, a kind of chained verse written by two haiku poets, from a given haiku (or "hokku").
Today I have a nice haiku for you to work with. It's a haiku written by Kim M. Russell in response on one of our Quest For A New Masterpiece as featured in a Weekend Meditation in August 2018. I commented on this haiku:
[...] "Nice juxtaposition in this one; and also a kind fragment and phrase. Very well done … Your haiku paints a wonderful scene with the beauty of the classics like Onitsura and Basho. This is a haiku that will survive time … a masterpiece."[...]
And I think you all will think (or say) the same. Here is the haiku by Kim to work with:
between dusty cars
an orange butterfly flits
the traffic rumbles
Kim M. Russell, 26th August 2018
This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7:00 PM (CEST) and will remain open until September 19th at noon (CEST). I will try to publish our new episode later on. For now ... have fun!
Share your completed Tan Renga with us all here at our Haiku Kai.
| 1. | Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr | 4. | Kim M. Russell | 7. | Madasahatter572 | |
| 2. | Cressida | 5. | Pat | 8. | Janice | |
| 3. | Virginia Popescu | 6. | lynn__ | 9. | Dolores |
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