Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
First this ... I was a bit confused I think, because I published a Tan Renga Challenge yesterday instead of a Tokubetsudesu episode, my excuses for that, but this week we will not have a Tokubetsudesu episode. Sorry.
Today I have a nice "hokku" for you created by our co-host in the background, Jane Reichhold. You all will certainly know her I think. You can find a lot abou her by visiting her website AHA-poetry.
Here is the "hokku" for today's Tan Renga Challenge:
silence
in the blind wind's dance
blossoms
© Jane Reichhold
A beauty I will say, but also a challenge to create the second stanza.
Cherry Blossoms in the Evening |
silence
in the blind wind's dance
blossoms (Jane Reichhold)
admiring the cherry blossoms
lying naked on a deer skin (Chèvrefeuille)
I like this completion, as I looked at that beautiful image above a haibun I once wrote came in mind.
This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until May 30th at noon (CET). I will publish our new "hokku", this time one by a classical haiku poet/ess, on our Twitter account.
blossom ballet
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silence
ReplyDeletein the blind wind's dance
blossoms Jane Reichhold
to an old song in his head
waltzing with her memory Joyce Lorenson
silence
ReplyDeletein the blind wind's dance
blossoms (Jane Reichhold)
admiring the cherry blossoms
lying naked on a deer skin (Chèvrefeuille)
silence
in the blind wind's dance
blossoms (Jane Reichhold)
if only the wind has eyes
helpless leaves near the blossoms ( milan rajkumar )