Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at our last "Imagination With Paul Militaru" episode. This month I had the privilege to use the beautiful photos by Paul Militaru to inspire you. Paul is a brilliant photographer and his photos are really awesomeMore of his beautiful photos you can find at: Paul Militaru, Photograph Portfolio His website is really worth visiting.
For this last "Imagination With ..." episode I have found a wonderful photo in which autumn, the season running on the Northern hemisphere, is beautifully portrait. And this beauty brought a nice waka in mind by Saigyo, and I think you know this waka ...
alongside the path
fresh water flows, and
in the willow’s shade
just for a little while
would I take my ease..
© Saigyo (1118-1190)
This waka we have seen very often here at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai and I cannot go on with this episode without the haiku Basho once wrote in response on this waka:
one patch of a rice field when it was planted I left the willow tree © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
Here is the photo by Paul Militaru to inspire you:
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Autumn Willow (photo © Paul Militaru) |
Here are a few poems from my archives: weeping willow
in the autumn sunlight
a golden tree
© Chèvrefeuille
a golden tree
© Chèvrefeuille
autumn departs
in deep silence willow leaves fall -
tears on this grave
as the willow is green again
another year has gone
© Chèvrefeuille
tears of a geisha
her virginity lost to a soldier -
pussy willow blooms
© Chèvrefeuille
And of course I had to try to create a new haiku (or tanka):
in deep silence willow leaves fall -
tears on this grave
as the willow is green again
another year has gone
© Chèvrefeuille
tears of a geisha
her virginity lost to a soldier -
pussy willow blooms
© Chèvrefeuille
And of course I had to try to create a new haiku (or tanka):
bright blue sky
a natural frame work
autumn willow
© Chèvrefeuille
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until November 2nd at noon (CET). I will try to post our next episode, feather pen (Or quill pen), later on. For now ... have fun!
PS I am busy with creating our new CDHK prompt-list for next month. November will be our first Tanka month here. I hope to improve your and mine tanka writing technique through the Ten Tanka Writing Techniques by Teika.
Share your haiku or tanka inspired on this beautiful autumn photo by Paul Militaru with us all. Please share Paul's website if you are using his photo in your post.
1. | Dolores | 7. | Sky | 13. | Nicole Pottier | |
2. | Noor | 8. | Hélène/Mother Willow | 14. | B i r g i t t a | |
3. | Woodsman | 9. | kaykuala | 15. | Xenia Tran | |
4. | humbirdstar | 10. | Pat (jazzytower) | 16. | Sara McNulty | |
5. | Virginia Popescu | 11. | Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr | |||
6. | Kim M. Russell | 12. | petra domina |
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Carpe Diem Imagination Challenge #5 Autumn Willow:
ReplyDeleteautumn's brilliance
fish swimming in the shadow
of the pond side willow
Hi Kristjaan, here's a tanrenga from my side
ReplyDeletehttps://srisudhak.wordpress.com/2016/11/02/autumn-song/