Friday, October 28, 2016

Carpe Diem Imagination With Paul Militaru #5 autumn willow


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at our last "Imagination With Paul Militaru" episode. This month I had the privilege to use the beautiful photos by Paul Militaru to inspire you. Paul is a brilliant photographer and his photos are really awesomeMore of his beautiful photos you can find at: Paul Militaru, Photograph Portfolio His website is really worth visiting.

For this last "Imagination With ..." episode I have found a wonderful photo in which autumn, the season running on the Northern hemisphere, is beautifully portrait. And this beauty brought a nice waka in mind by Saigyo, and I think you know this waka ...

alongside the path
fresh water flows, and
in the willow’s shade
just for a little while
would I take my ease..


© Saigyo (1118-1190)



This waka we have seen very often here at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai and I cannot go on with this episode without the haiku Basho once wrote in response on this waka:

one patch of a rice field when it was planted I left the willow tree © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

Here is the photo by Paul Militaru to inspire you:


Autumn Willow (photo © Paul Militaru)
Isn't it a beauty? I hope this autumn willow will inspire you to create haiku or tanka.

Here are a few poems from my archives: weeping willow
in the autumn sunlight
a golden tree


© Chèvrefeuille

autumn departs
in deep silence willow leaves fall -
tears on this grave
as the willow is green again
another year has gone

© Chèvrefeuille

tears of a geisha
her virginity lost to a soldier -
pussy willow blooms

© Chèvrefeuille

And of course I had to try to create a new haiku (or tanka):

bright blue sky a natural frame work autumn willow

© Chèvrefeuille

This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until November 2nd at noon (CET). I will try to post our next episode, feather pen (Or quill pen), later on. For now ... have fun!

PS I am busy with creating our new CDHK prompt-list for next month. November will be our first Tanka month here. I hope to improve your and mine tanka writing technique through the Ten Tanka Writing Techniques by Teika.


Share your haiku or tanka inspired on this beautiful autumn photo by Paul Militaru with us all. Please share Paul's website if you are using his photo in your post.


1. Dolores  7. Sky  13. Nicole Pottier  
2. Noor  8. Hélène/Mother Willow  14. B i r g i t t a  
3. Woodsman  9. kaykuala  15. Xenia Tran  
4. humbirdstar  10. Pat (jazzytower)  16. Sara McNulty  
5. Virginia Popescu  11. Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr  
6. Kim M. Russell  12. petra domina  

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2 comments:

  1. Carpe Diem Imagination Challenge #5 Autumn Willow:

    autumn's brilliance
    fish swimming in the shadow
    of the pond side willow

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  2. Hi Kristjaan, here's a tanrenga from my side
    https://srisudhak.wordpress.com/2016/11/02/autumn-song/

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