Dear
Haijin, visitors and travelers,
In this new
episode of Tokubetsudesu, a special one "looking back in time", I love to introduce (again) a classical haiku-poetess
named Koyu-Ni, she was (as e.g. Chiyo-Ni) a Buddhistic nun (as can be seen at
her name, "ni" stands for "female monk".) There aren't many
haiku known by her. I ran into this one as I was preparing this episode and I
decided to make it myself easy today. Why? This Tokubetsudesu episode is a “reprise”
from our rich CDHK history, maybe you remember our special feature “Sparkling
Stars”.
hana chirite shizuka ni narinu hito-gokoro
the
blossoms have fallen:
our minds are now
tranquil
© Koyu-Ni
(Tr. R.H. Blyth)
[...]
Koyu-Ni died in 1782, her family name was Matsumato. She is one of the more
prominent woman poets of the Edo period. She learned haiku from Songi the
First. [...]
I love to
share a translation of my own for this haiku:
tranquility
-
finally I have found peace,
blossoms have fallen
© Koyu-Ni
(Tr. Chèvrefeuille)
I think
that in this translation the peace of mind is stronger present. With every gust
of wind I am anxious that the fragile Cherry blossoms will be scattered and
torn apart, but as all blossoms have fallen than my heart and mind are at
peace, there is no anxiety anymore and that gives me that feeling of
tranquility.
Not that
this tranquility is superior to the excitement of our hearts while the Cherry
blossoms were blooming. It is neither better nor worse. It is simply
inevitable, like the blooming, like the falling of the Cherry blossoms
themselves.
There is a
Waka by Narihira (825-880), which may
well have been the original of this haiku:
were there
no cherry blossoms
in this world
our minds might know
serenity in spring
© Narihira
A humorous
verse, by Basho (1644-1694), of the same import, is the following:
hana ni nenu kore mo tagui ka nezumi no su
is it not
like a mouse's nest, -
this being unable to sleep
for the flowers?
© Basho
(Tr. R.H. Blyth)
That is to
say, the poet is unable to sleep at night because of the excitement of the
Cherry blossoms, and compares his heart to the nest of the mice who are
squeaking and scuffling all night long.
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| Cherry Blossoms in full bloom |
One more,
by Shado (died 1737), who was a student under Basho:
hana chitte take miru noki no yasusa kana
the flowers
having fallen,
looking at the bamboos,
it is restful under the eaves
© Shado
All
wonderful haiku I think, tributes to the beauty of the Cherry blossoms, and the
anxiety to see them fall and be scattered.
Life and
dead are living together just on a thin line of silk, so close to one another,
but that's the circle of life, the beauty of Mother Nature. This is what haiku
is ... writing about nature and mankind as being part of its beauty.
The goal of
this Tokubetsudesu episode (in which I gave you a reprise episode of “Sparkling
Stars” is to write a classical haiku, following the classical rules of haiku,
about the circle of life of the fragile Cherry blossoms (or any other fragile
blossom). Have fun, be inspired and share your haiku with us all here at Carpe
Diem Haiku Kai, the place to be if you like composing haiku and sharing them
with the world.
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| Sakura in my backyard |
As you maybe know I am not a big fan of the classical rules. In a way I am more like Santoka Taneda, who also was a "free-styler" in haiku, but of course I had to try it myself to create a classical haiku. So here is my attempt to create a classical haiku on the fragility of blossoms.
fragile cherry blossoms
cover the backyard of the mansion
tears rolling down my cheeks
© Chèvrefeuille
Awesome ... I did it ... I created a classical haiku ... Now it is up to you my dear Haijin, visitors and travelers.
This "looking back in time" Tokubetsudesu episode is
open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until May 15th at noon (CET). I have already published our new Tan Renga Challenge "hokku" (starting verse) for May 12th, May 13th and May 14th at
our twitter account.
