Friday, January 30, 2015

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #71, Basho's "borrowing sleep"


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

First I have to apologize for the delay of this new Tan Renga Challenge. And second I have to apologize for something else ... I have asked several of you if I may use their haiku for our Tan Renga Challenge, but I have forgotten to write them down. So my apologies for that too. Would you please be so kind as I have asked you for permission to use your haiku to write that in the comment field of this episode.

For this episode of our Tan Renga Challenge I have chosen a haiku by Matsuo Basho, one of the big five classical haiku-poets. I think this haiku by Basho can inspire you in a lot of ways to write a second stanza to the Tan Renga as id the goal of this feature. That second stanza (two lines; 7-7) makes the Tan Renga complete or will continue the scene depicted in it.

borrowing sleep
from the scarecrow's sleeves
midnight frost

© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)


And here is my second stanza:

borrowing sleep
from the scarecrow's sleeves
midnight frost  
                   (Basho)

the abandoned little girl
left alone without grief         (Chèvrefeuille)

A very sad continuation, but in those times girls weren't always welcome in a family and in a lot of countries nowadays that's still reality ....
This continuation is inspired on a Dutch special week "The Week of the Forgotten Kids" which is now. Even in a country like The Netherlands there are abandoned children left alone on strange places. For example several months ago in one of the major cities a little child was found in a waste-bin.

This episode of our Tan Renga Challenge is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until next Friday at noon (CET).


Make the Tan Renga complete by adding your two lined second stanza towards it.
1. Pirate  6. Bastet's Waka Library  11. opie houston  
2. jazzytower  7. Paloma  12. Dolores  
3. Leslie Moon  8. Magical Mystical Teacher  13. Tournesol  
4. Mish D Sky  9. usha menon  14. Lorna  
5. Lovely Thing  10. Cressida de Nova  15. Nimi  

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3 comments:

  1. Hamish - I really enjoyed your tan renga a dark dance.

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  2. Kristjaan, As I said before, it will be an honor for me if you choose a Haiku by me on CDHK.
    Nimi

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