Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
First I have to apologize for the delay of this new Tan Renga Challenge. And second I have to apologize for something else ... I have asked several of you if I may use their haiku for our Tan Renga Challenge, but I have forgotten to write them down. So my apologies for that too. Would you please be so kind as I have asked you for permission to use your haiku to write that in the comment field of this episode.
For this episode of our Tan Renga Challenge I have chosen a haiku by Matsuo Basho, one of the big five classical haiku-poets. I think this haiku by Basho can inspire you in a lot of ways to write a second stanza to the Tan Renga as id the goal of this feature. That second stanza (two lines; 7-7) makes the Tan Renga complete or will continue the scene depicted in it.
borrowing sleep
from the scarecrow's sleeves
midnight frost
midnight frost
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
borrowing
sleep
from the scarecrow's sleeves
midnight frost (Basho)
from the scarecrow's sleeves
midnight frost (Basho)
the abandoned little girl
left alone without grief (Chèvrefeuille)
A very sad continuation, but in those times girls weren't always welcome in a family and in a lot of countries nowadays that's still reality ....
This continuation is inspired on a Dutch special week "The Week of the Forgotten Kids" which is now. Even in a country like The Netherlands there are abandoned children left alone on strange places. For example several months ago in one of the major cities a little child was found in a waste-bin.
This episode of our Tan Renga Challenge is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until next Friday at noon (CET).
yours is a solemn remembrance
ReplyDeleteHamish - I really enjoyed your tan renga a dark dance.
ReplyDeleteKristjaan, As I said before, it will be an honor for me if you choose a Haiku by me on CDHK.
ReplyDeleteNimi