Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
The New Year is already two days old and it's Friday today ... so time for a new episode of our Tan Renga Challenge. Our special feature (every Friday) in which I challenge you all to write a second stanza of 7-7 syllables towards a given first stanza of 5-7-5 syllables. This week I have chosen a haiku composed by Björn Rudberg of Brudberg's Writings. Björn composed this haiku in response on our prompt "Last Year". As I read his haiku I was immediately "in love" with it. It brought nice memories to my mind and the first I thought of was the meaning of the Old Oak, the theme of his haiku, in the ancient druids Ogham oracle and alphabet.
Credits: Old Oak |
Credits: (c) photo Björn |
The above photo goes along with Björn's haiku ... and here it is:
the
old oak’s roots -
reach from past to future
recall last year
(c) Björn Rudberg
reach from past to future
recall last year
(c) Björn Rudberg
Isn't it a beauty? And as I read the above given meaning of Oak than this haiku becomes magical and mysterious. An awesome take on "last year". To write a second stanza towards it will not be an easy task, but .... well you know me .... (smiles)
the
old oak’s roots -
reach from past to future
recall last year (c) Björn Rudberg
reach from past to future
recall last year (c) Björn Rudberg
listen, listen carefully
oak leaves rustling secrets (c) Chèvrefeuille
Ah ... I like it as an idea comes true. I loved bringing the magic and mystery into my second stanza and I think I have succeeded.
This Tan Renga Challenge is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until next Friday January 9th at noon (CET). Have fun!
Thank you for your great post in response to my haiku.. I look forward to read all the other contributions.
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku -- great photo! :)
DeleteThank you Björn ... I just had to use your gorgeous haiku ... and I was inspired to turn it into this post ...
DeleteThanks Bjorn,
ReplyDeleteI've been away. Catching up on writing first. Hopefully on reading too... soon.