Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new month of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. This month its all about senses. As you all know there are five senses (and sometimes people have a 6th sense), but as we will see this month we have more than five senses.
This month its all about sharpen the senses or anata no kankakuwo migaku and our prompt-list has been created by one of our CDHK family-members, Hamish Managua Gunn (a.k.a. Pirate). Hamish has provided me with a wonderful prompt-list and he also provided me with his notes about all the prompts this month.
February will be a little bit different than we are used to. I will write a short introduction for every prompt and than I will share Hamish' notes with you. So let me start with the first introduction of February.
Introduction
This month its all about the senses as you all know we have five senses (hearing, touching, seeing, smelling and tasting), but this month we will explore several other senses. As I started with this introduction there was immediately a haiku which I had to share here in which "hearing" is the theme. I think you will remember this haiku, because I used it not so long ago.
shichikei
wa kiri ni kakurete mii no kane
seven views
hidden in the mist -
the (temple) bell of Mii
© Basho (Tr. Jim Kacian)
This haiku was a kind of bet which Basho accepted and it's about the Eight Views of Omi and the bet was to catch all those views in one haiku. Basho succeeded, as we can read in the above haiku, but in this haiku we also see "hearing" in the last line the (temple) bell of Mii. Basho refers here to the sound of the temple bell of Mii.
I love to share an oldie by myself here also with "hearing" in it:
wedding
bells sound
through the autumn haze
early this morning
© Chèvrefeuille
through the autumn haze
early this morning
© Chèvrefeuille
A nice "oldie" I would say in which we can see "hearing" in the first line wedding bells sound.
Hamish Managua Gunn |
Hamish on hearing:
Those who
work with people who are blind, or deaf, or mute report consistently that
whereas blind people are often to be admired for their peace of mind, deaf
people are often frustrated and tense. Why is this so? Perhaps sounds are the most beautiful and
important sense in our lives, maybe, just maybe even more important than sight.
Hearing allows us to communicate with each other by receiving sounds and
interpreting speech, as well as listening to wonderful music and communing with
nature's many soft sounds. Hearing loss means a certain kind of loneliness when
among people.
A sense of
hearing can be divided simply into two separate categories: listening, and
hearing. Listening is, of course, voluntary, but hearing is not. When we listen
to a Beethoven concerto, we are consciously listening to it, but when a baby
hears sounds, the baby's mind processes these sounds subconsciously into
language. In a somewhat similar way to when you hear a car beep its horn and
you automatically jump back, without analyzing the situation, and even when you
do not see the car.
Animals
like bats, porpoises, dolphins and whales have the ability to determine
orientation to other objects through interpretation of reflected sound (like
sonar). They most often use this to navigate through poor conditions or to
identify and track prey. Blind people report they are able to navigate and in
some cases identify an object by interpreting reflected sounds (especially
their own footsteps), a phenomenon known as human echolocation.
Your haiku
today should include 'sound' in it. Let us hear your haiku!
My response
My response
this old mansion is alive
the Sakura* blooms
© Chèvrefeuille
* A kind of Cherry tree
Credits: Temple Bell |
Another one picked from my archives:
from far
away
the sound of the temple bell
echoing through the mist
the sound of the temple bell
echoing through the mist
echoing
through the mist
the strong sound of a temple bell -
scared butterfly
the strong sound of a temple bell -
scared butterfly
scared
butterfly
flies in from far away
temple bell - dreams
flies in from far away
temple bell - dreams
© Chèvrefeuille
The above (cascading) haiku was inspired on a haiku by Yosa Buson (1716-1784):
tsuriganeni
tomarite nemuru kochoukana
on a temple
bell
alights and naps
a butterfly
© Buson
I hope you did like this first episode of February in which we will sharpen our senses together with Hamish Managua Gunn.
This episode is OPEN for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until February 3rd at noon (CET). I will (try to) publish our next episode, sweetness, later on. For now ... have fun, be inspired and share your haiku (or tanka) with us all here at our Haiku Kai.
alights and naps
a butterfly
© Buson
I hope you did like this first episode of February in which we will sharpen our senses together with Hamish Managua Gunn.
This episode is OPEN for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until February 3rd at noon (CET). I will (try to) publish our next episode, sweetness, later on. For now ... have fun, be inspired and share your haiku (or tanka) with us all here at our Haiku Kai.
Really like the style this was done, Chev. Use of sound, and a bell, in haiku really seems to work well.
ReplyDeleteSenses are great in all style of poetry... hope I can drop by a little bit more often... If anyone want to participate or mix prompts we have a haibun monday every second week from now on at dVerse.... :-)
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