Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
What a joy to bring the start of our new Renga Party "white dusted meadow". It's the second time we are doing this and I hope you all will like it. Let me first tell you the goal of this Renga Party. Making a Renga together is just for fun and it learns you how you can improve your haiku writing skills through association.
Every link, in this Yoyoshi 44, has it's own season or theme which are already given in the list. In the list you can see BOLD printed abbreviations, which are explained above the list, which correspond with the season or theme you have to use.
The link before you you have to use to associate on to write your own link. I have a little time rule: you have to respond within 24 hours to write your link. Your created link you write down in the comments field including an invitation to the one after you e.g. it's your turn Hank.
Our first
Renga was a so called "kasen-renga" and had 36 links, so it was
slightly shorter than the "yoyoshi". For this "yoyoshi" I
have asked Georgia (a.k.a. Bastet), our featured haiku poetess of last December,
to write the starting verse or "hokku".
Here is the
"hokku" of this "yoyoshi":
white
dusted meadow
remembering spring’s glory
tufts of pampas grass
remembering spring’s glory
tufts of pampas grass
© Georgia
(a.k.a. Bastet)
The title of this Yoyoshi is the first line of the hokku.
Here is our list for this Renga Party:
white dusted meadow
white dusted meadow
[SP=spring; SU=summer; A=autumn; W=winter;
N=non-seasonal or free as in without theme]
A few basis
rules to remember. Avoid repeating a noun or verb in the work. Switch subject
matter so there are not too many verses on food or water, etc. Link ONLY to the
verse above and not to any other. Use the words "insects" and
"dreams" only once in a poem.
1. [3] SP Georgia -- hokku
2. [2] SP Kim Russell
3. [3] SP Nimi Arora
4. [2] N Jazzytower
5. [3] MOON/A Candy
5. [3] MOON/A Candy
6. [2] A Dove Dungeon
7. [3] A Dove Dungeon
8. [2] N/LOVE Writersdream9
9. [3] N/LOVE Ese Klava
10. [2] N/LOVE Dolores
11. [3] N Thom Amundsen
12.[2] N Gayle Rose
12.[2] N Gayle Rose
13. [3] MOON/SU Hank (Kaykuala)
14. [2] SU Lothar
15. [3] SU Christy
16. [2] N Celestine
17. [3] FLOWER/SP Milan
18. [2] SP Chèvrefeuille
19. [3] SP Chèvrefeuille
20. [2] N Georgia
21. [3] N Kim Russell
22. [2] N Nimi Arora
23. [3] W Jazzytower
24. [2] W Candy
25. [3] N/LOVE Dove Dungeon
24. [2] W Candy
25. [3] N/LOVE Dove Dungeon
26. [2] N/LOVE Writersdream9
27. [3] N/LOVE Ese Klava
28. [2] N Dolores
29. [3] MOON/A Thom Amundsen
30. [2] A Gayle Rose
31. [3] A Gayle Rose
32. [2] N Hank (Kaykuala)
33. [3] N Lothar
34. [2] N Christy
35. [3] FLOWER/SP Celestine
36. [2] W Milan
37. [3] SU Milan
38. [2] N Chèvrefeuille
39. [3] N Georgia
40. [2] A Kim Russell
41. [3] N Nimi Arora
42. [2] W Jazzytower
43. [3] SP Candy
36. [2] W Milan
37. [3] SU Milan
38. [2] N Chèvrefeuille
39. [3] N Georgia
40. [2] A Kim Russell
41. [3] N Nimi Arora
42. [2] W Jazzytower
43. [3] SP Candy
44. [2] SP Dove Dungeon, should relate to #1 in some way and
close the work -- ageku
Well ... I hope you all like this list and I hope this Yoyoshi will become a beauty as was our first "kasen-renga" in our first Carpe Diem Renga Party.
Have fun!
By the way: Georgia your hokku is already on, so the first who has to write a link is Kim Russell.
By the way: Georgia your hokku is already on, so the first who has to write a link is Kim Russell.
Here is the hokku again.
ReplyDeletewhite dusted meadow
remembering spring’s glory
tufts of pampas grass
© Georgia (a.k.a. Bastet)
It's your turn Kim Russell
I think I know what has happened; it isn't recognising me, so I have posted my contribution and created a link - so here it is again:
Deleteeach crystal or flake
piece of a larger jigsaw
covering earth’s green
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
One more try:
Deleteeach crystal or flake
piece of a larger jigsaw
covering earth’s green
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Over to you Nimi Arora
crystals and flakes a jigsaw
Deleteblanket covering earth’s green
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Over to you Nimi Arora
MOON/SU Hank(Kaykuala) Hank's contribution http://imagery77.blogspot.my/2016/01/fun-summer-night-festivals.html
ReplyDeleteA dreamer’s delight
Fun summer night festivals
Food and free concerts
It's your turn Lothar
Hank
Hank's contribution:
ReplyDeletehttp://imagery77.blogspot.my/2016/01/fun-summer-night-festivals.html
A dreamer’s delight
Fun summer night festivals
Food and free concerts
It's your turn Lothar
Hank
Wow, Kristjaaen, you are so good to do this for us. It must be hard to keep track of everything. From my heart to yours, thank you!
ReplyDeleteJust thought, do we post on our blogs and link here? Sorry.
ReplyDeleteyou write you reply here and if you like, as some did last renga, you can post the renga results as they grow. Bastet
DeleteI'm already confused as I don't see Kim Russell's response but Hank's instead. And what do the numbers in parentheses correspond to...are they the number of lines we write? Thank you for clarifying.
ReplyDeleteGayle ~
The numbers between [] are pointing to the lines of the link that can only be 3 or 2 lines.
DeleteHi Georgia, I have tried to add my contribution and nothing seems to be working. I even posted and linked it. I'm going to restart my laptop and come back to see if it's appearing on this page. Sorry for the hassle. I feel terrible for breaking the chain. :(
ReplyDeleteDear Kim your link is published, but you had to write a two-lined stanza. Is it possible that you rewrite your stanza of three lines in to two lines?
ReplyDeleteKristjaan, please forgive me for messing this up. It's my first time doing this and I was so engrossed in writing my link I didn't look at the number in the square brackets. I have changed it so it now has two lines and it has been posted. I will try to be on the ball for the next part! Once again, many apologies for the mistakes. Kim :}
DeleteDoesn't matter Kim ... writing renga is for fun and i hope you will enjoy it. Thank you for your link change to 2 lines.
DeleteIt is possible that your link written here in the comment field isn't seen immediately, because I have to read every comment before i publish them. Of course i will do that every day.
ReplyDeleteFrom the start -
ReplyDeletewhite dusted meadow
remembering spring’s glory
tufts of pampas grass © Georgia (a.k.a. Bastet)
crystals and flakes a jigsaw
blanket covering earth’s green © Kim M. Russell, 2016
Now, my turn :)
ReplyDeleteWarmth forsaken
puzzle of colors scatters
-Balloons depart
--Nimi Arora
Over to Jazzytower now...
ReplyDelete
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the trail a
cleansing breath of mountain air
-Pat R
On to you Candy
full moon shines
ReplyDeletethrough barren tree branches
twisted shadows
----
... your turn Dove Dungeon
the cricket asks for the dawn
ReplyDeletein sweet tones of love for you
It's your turn Ese!
I've started a page for this Renga Party. It makes it easier to read. Here's the link if interested.
ReplyDeletehttp://adasalcove.blogspot.com/2016/01/white-dusted-meadow.html
Ese is on twitter but I can't remember the name of her acct there. Will try.
DeleteGood for you Dolores ... I did the same thing and made it a sticky post on Bastet and Sekhmet's Library - https://bastetandsekhmet.wordpress.com/2016/01/24/yoyoshi-white-dusted-meadow-renga-party-january-24-2016/
Delete... Bastet
Thanks, Dolores. It's nice to have it all laid out like that. My first go at this type of "party."
DeleteGayle ~
Your Welcome, Gale!
DeleteDolores
the creak of door
ReplyDeletestill breathless after parting kiss
i meet the morning
Sorry for being so late - this had slipped my mind completely!
Thank you for reminding, Georgia! :)
Now it's all in your hands, Dolores!
No problem, glad to have helped :-) Bastet
Deletewords of a new haiku
ReplyDeletemingling with my heart
Your turn Thom Amundsen
ReplyDeletelove create melody
ReplyDeletecapture natural sound
On to you Gayle ....
love create melody
ReplyDeletecapture natural sound
peace in harmony
sorry, forgot the third line - now onto you Gayle ...
nature's stillness sighs
ReplyDeleteoverhead owl's soundless flight
Your turn, Hank
Kristjaan, Hank and Lothar have not responded for a few days. I also know they posted early in the line up so maybe they do not know it is their turn now. In any case if it is easier and directed by you I would be glad to go ahead with my turn. Just let me know and give me 24 hours to respond and I will pick up the ball with my three lines.
ReplyDeleteGo ahead with your turn Christy. I will notice Lothar.
DeleteDescending on prey
ReplyDeleteMemories of fireworks
Searing heat explodes
I went ahead since Hank already posted earlier. Kristjaan, please determine who is next.
Sorry for delaying. I wasn't online for some time.
DeleteAt the pier feet in water
DeleteSummer moon riding the waves
Christ, it's your turn!
Lothar
PS. Sorry for the delay!
As far as I am concerned, your three lines fit!
DeleteI'm so sorry for coming in late. By my calculations I reckoned my turn would be today.So sorry.
ReplyDeleteHere are my two lines:
our bodies on fire
dousing the winter cold
You are next Milan.
Kristjaan, I'm so sorry for coming on late. I was under the impression that I was linking up today.
ReplyDeleteHere are my two lines:
our bodies set ablaze
dousing the winter cold
Milan, you are next.
Thanks Celestine
ReplyDeleteHere is mine
spring fever
passion increases
red plum blossoms !
Sorry Kristjaan for the lateness !
your turn now , please !
It's okay Milan. Thanks. Here is my first link (2 lines):
ReplyDeleteone single tulip shows her face
first encounter with new life
And this is the following 3 lined stanza:
the old mansion
comes alive after the darkness
old cherry blooms
Your turn now Georgia ...
Stanza 20 is the next step Georgia.
Deletelovely Kristjaan:
ReplyDeletecarpeting the front lawn
flurry of pink snow
Stanza 21 - Hello Kim, it's your turn!
I have tried to move the focus from below to above!
ReplyDeletecircadian sky
marking time with solar pulse
azure canopy
Over to you Nimi
Yours is stanza 22, Mimi.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim
ReplyDeleteclumsy flapping of first flight
buoyant with adventurous dreams
Over to Jazzytower now...
ReplyDeletethe noon day sun peeks
ReplyDeletethrough gray winter clouds
boisterous flutter
You're next Candy
flocks of blackbirds robed like monks
ReplyDeletegather offerings of seed
----
your turn Dove Dungeon
Beautiful, everyone!
ReplyDeletethe tenderness of the rose
comforts her deep longing
Okay, Ese, you're on!
a hint of sunset
ReplyDeletepaints her toenails on window sill
-is he coming?
It's all in your hands now, Dolores!
PS: Once again my apologies for delay!
long shadows fall
ReplyDeletemingling with daydreams
Thom your turn now!
ReplyDeletewhimsy night caress
ReplyDeletesweet breeze serenade sundress
delicious duress
onto Gayle Rose :)
ReplyDeletefirst tide laps the jagged shore
ReplyDeleteshrike fish the shallow inlet
juicy persimmon
crimson orange reflects sunset
dragonfly alights
Your turn, Hank.
32. [2] N Hank (Kaykuala)
ReplyDeleteDragonfly stops in transit
Just so to rest for the night
Your turn Lothar
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
ReplyDeleteAs you all can see and read, the renga has been broken, but in this case Lothar can not do something about it, because he has problems with his Internet. So I have decided to step in and write the next chain in our renga.
early Sunrise
children play on the beach
dragonkite against the sky
It's your turn Christy
Thank you Kristjaan. I will post something in the next 24 hours.
ReplyDeleteStorming the sandcastle
ReplyDeleteMarauding gulls dip and dive
Your turn Celestine!
Thank you Christy
ReplyDeleteah the blooms
spring’s shimmer
everywhere
Your turn, Milan.
Thank you Celestine !
ReplyDeleteHere is my two liner
here and there on dry branches
gardenia of snowflakes
And the three liner ;
above the hillocks
pine needles' and wild plums' smell
taste of cool rice wine
over to you Kristjaan , pl .
in front of the fireplace
ReplyDeletered shadows on the white walls
Your turn Georgia
Thank you Kristjaan for advising me that the Renga has restarted. Love your verse ..
ReplyDeleteflickering stories
children make shadow ducks
laughter fills the air
It's your turn Kim.
Thank you, Georgia, for giving me such a lovely haiku as inspiration!
ReplyDeletegardeners rake fallen leaves
crackling on the damp bonfire
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Over to you, Nimi.
Thanks Kim. Great to be back at the Renga Party.
ReplyDeletetapping feet
the beating drums
bushes sway
--Nimi Arora
Your turn now, Jazzytower :)
Something went wrong Jazzytower couldn't link her stanza so she has asked me to link it to the Renga Party. So here it is, the stanza written by Jazzytower:
ReplyDeleteas the rhythm fills the air
first snowflakes fall from the sky
Your turn Candy
covering the ground
ReplyDeletetender white plum blossoms
early morning
~
on to you Dove Dungeon
Here is the entire Renga
ReplyDeletehttp://adasalcove.blogspot.com/2016/01/white-dusted-meadow.html
Thank you Dolores it has become a beauty again.
DeleteKristjaan, if you do this again, I would love to take part. It is the first time I've seen this and it looks like great fun.
ReplyDeleteDear Petru, i will start a new renga-party around the summer-solstice (June 21st). Soon to come a call to subscribe to the renga-party.
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