Showing posts with label Joyce Lorenson. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Joyce Lorenson. Show all posts

Monday, June 27, 2016

Carpe Diem Special #212 Joyce Lorenson's 4th "a glint of mica"


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

This is the last CD-Special of this month. This month all the CD-specials were by Joyce Lorenson, she was the winner of the "New Life" kukai. Joyce is a very gifted haiku poetess and maybe you have already read her exclusive CDHK E-book "A Glint of Mica" which you can download at the right side of our Kai.

cover of "A Glint of Mica" by Joyce Lorenson

I think this E-book has become a beauty. In "A Glint of Mica" you will find haiku and haiga by Joyce. For this last CD-Special I have chosen the "title"-haiku of her E-book "A Glint of Mica" to share with you here.

a glint of mica
the swaggering strut
of a raucous magpie
© Joyce Lorenson 
Magpie
As you all know the goal of the CD-Specials is to create a new haiku in the same tone, sense and spirit as the one given. So here is my attempt to try to write a haiku in the spirit of the haiku by Joyce:
screaming peacock
walking around the farm
like a watchdog
© Chèvrefeuille
Not as strong as I had hoped, but I think this haiku is somewhat in the same tone, sense and spirit as the one by Joyce.
Here is another "peacock" haiku from my archives, this is what is called a cascading haiku: 
king of the farm
spreads out his gorgeous tail -
feathers on a vase

feathers on a vase
eyes looking deep into mine -
again in love
again in love -
the first day of Spring has come
listen to the breeze
© Chèvrefeuille
Peacock
I hope you did like this CD-Special and that I have inspired you together with Joyce.
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until July 2nd at noon (CET). I will try to publish our next episode, Poland, later on. For now ... have fun! 
 


 

Sunday, June 19, 2016

Carpe Diem Special #211 Joyce Lorenson's 3rd "May evening"


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

It is time for a new episode of our CD-Special. This month we have a great haiku poetess as our featured poet. Joyce Lorenson is a very active member of our CDHK family as you can read in the most comment fields of our posts. Joyce has no own weblog so she was also featured in one of our "In The Spotlight" episodes and she was featured in the Spring issue of our e-zine Souchou. It is my pleasure to share a few haiku written by Joyce here with you to inspire you.

May evening
glittering with starlight
apple blossoms


slanting sunlight
by the sink
forced forsythia

their warm color
melting snow
in the daffodil trumpets


Daffodils
As you all know the goal of the CD-Specials is to try to write / create an all new haiku inspired on the given haiku ... trying to catch the tone, sense and spirit of the haiku poet.

Here is my attempt I chose to use a "chained tanka":


celebrating the sun
with narcissus flowers in my hair -
Spring Equinox
day and night the same length
departing Winter


departing Winter
visiting my ancestors graves
paying my respects
to Mother Nature ... flowers in my hair
Vernal Equinox


© Chèvrefeuille

This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until June 24th 10 PM (CET). Have fun!


Monday, June 13, 2016

Carpe Diem CD-special #210 Joyce Lorenson's 2nd "butterfly wings"


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
 
Welcome at our second Carpe Diem Special in which I introduce the beauty of the haiku of Joyce Lorenson, our winner of the 'New Life'-kukai. Today I have another beautiful haiku for you. Joyce wrote this one recently in response on our Cyprus episode:
 
warm currents
the Green Headed turtles
returning to Chelonia Beach
 
© Joyce Lorenson
 
A little while ago Joyce emailed me her haiku for her exclusive CDHK E-book and I love to share alreadya haiku from that E-book, as a kind of teaser:
 
 
 
 
buddleia
the brush of
butterfly wings
 
© Joyce Lorenson
A beauty don't you think so too? I hope to have Joyce's E-book ready this week. I will keep you all posted.
 
As you all know the goal of the CD-Special is to try to create a new haiku in the same tone, sense and spirit as the given one. So .... have fun!
 
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until June 18th at noon (CET). I will (try to) publish our new episode, Estonia, later on.
 
 

Sunday, June 5, 2016

Carpe Diem Special #209 "ripple in the lake" by Joyce Lorenson


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at the first Carpe Diem Special of this month. As you can see I have created a new logo for the CD-Specials in which I also has mentioned the featured haiku poetess of this month.

At the start of May 2016 I introduced our featured haiku poetess, Joyce Lorenson, in the second episode of "In The Spotlight at Carpe Diem".

Short biography:

Joyce Lorenson was born in 1944 in Rhode Island, U.S.A., and lived her first years on her grandfather's dairy farm by the sea, where her father and grandfather were fishermen and farmers. Her  childhood was spent working with her parents and brothers on their farms, a wonderful time so in tune with nature.
She grew up in the company of cows, surrounded by a river, a pond, fields, orchards and woods, and all the animals and birds that are part of that landscape. Her entire life she spent in New England not far from where she was born. At age twelve sheI was introduced to poetry at school and was smitten. She decided to become a poet.
Five years ago she decided it was now or never, she gave writing a go. After writing several traditional free verse poems, she began to feel a shorter form would suit her better. Having always loved haiku, a year ago she thought she would try her hand at haiku and found it very enjoyable.
She continually strives to improve her haiku. She had several poems published, a long awaited dream come true, as well as her dream of visiting Japan, which she did twice.

Joyce Lorenson
I remember that your responses on her haiku were wonderful and very uplifting. Recently Joyce won our “New Life” kukai with the following haiku:

spring blossoms
bees carrying
new life to the hive


© Joyce Joslin Lorenson

As you all know the winner of the kukai wins the opportunity to create an exclusive CDHK e-book and I have already started editing her e-book. I hope to have it ready later this week. Next to that prize the winner is the featured haiku poet for a month in the CD-Specials … this month I will introduce haiku written by her to inspire you all.

For this first CD-Special I have chosen a haiku, which I already used in the above mentioned episode of "In The Spotlight", but this haiku needs to be "in the spotlight" again to inspire you.

lights along the shore
shimmering reflections
ripple in the lake

© Joyce Lorenson


reflections (Lake San Rocco - Orta San Giulio Italy)

As I read this haiku I remember a lot of lakes I have seen. And I can see, feel, touch, smell and hear the lake. As I close my eyes I am there ... it's an awesome place to be. A place to meditate and contemplate ... reflecting on my life and daily life ... this is what this haiku does with me. What are your scenes, feelings and thoughts? Try to catch them in your haiku or tanka inspired on this beauty by Joyce ... and maybe try to catch that same spirit ... have fun!

Here is my attempt, trying to catch that same feeling:

City Park in my neighborhood photo  © Chèvrefeuille

water lilies reach
from the mud to the bright sun
straight through the water

© Chèvrefeuille

Well ... did I succeed ....?

This CD-Special is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until June 10th at noon (CET). I will publish our new episode, Luxembourg, later on. For now ... be inspired, have fun and share your haiku with us all.


Friday, May 27, 2016

Carpe Diem Extra May 27th 2016 Kukai "New Life" the results


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

What a joy I have the results of our "New Life" kukai. In this kukai eight (8) haiku poets have submitted a total of 22 haiku ... all beauties if I may say, but of course there can be only one winner and a "runner-up". The voting closed May 24th at 10.00 PM (CET) and now I have the results for you:

With a total of nine (9) points Joyce Joslin Lorenson (whom was featured in our second "In the Spotlight" episode) is our winner of the "New Life" kukai. Congratulations Joyce. Joyce won with the following haiku:

spring blossoms

bees carrying
new life to the hive
 


© Joyce Joslin Lorenson
Joyce Joslin Lorenson
And our "runner-up" with eight (8) points is Milan Rajkumar with his haiku, congratulations Milan

lifeless for a season
pupa inside the cocoon
spring gives life and wings

Milan Rajkumar
As you all (maybe) know as the winner you get the opportunity to create an e-book together with Chèvrefeuille's Publications and edited by Chèvrefeuille. So Joyce ... as the winner of our "New Life" kukai you have won the opportunity to create an e-book and you will be our featured haiku poetess next month (June). As the "runner-up" Milan Rajkumar will be featured in one of the Tokubetsudesu episode next month (June).

Here are the results for all submitted haiku:

9 points : haiku 4
8 points : haiku 10
6 points : haiku 6
5 points : haiku 11 & 21
3 points : haiku 15, 16, 17, 19 & 20
2 points : haiku 5 & 12
1 point :  haiku 2 & 18
0 points : haiku 1, 3, 7, 8, 9, 13, 14 & 22


It was really a pleasure to host this "New Life" kukai for you all.

Prayer(s) (image found on Flickr)

Here is our new kukai:

As you all know in our last Theme Week we have explored that beautiful Sufism prayer the "Latifa Prayer". That Theme Week inspired me to create the next kukai:


PRAYER(S)


As you all know you can submit a maximum of three (3) new (never published earlier) haiku for the kukai. Please send your submissions to our e-mail address: carpediemhaikukai@gmail.com don't forget to write kukai "prayer" in the subject-line.

This new kukai "Prayer" is now open for your submissions and will be open until June 20th 10.00 PM (CET)


I am looking forward to all of your beautiful haiku themed "prayer" or related to "prayer"

Namaste,

Chèvrefeuille, your host

Wednesday, May 4, 2016

In The Spotlight at Carpe Diem #2 Joyce Lorenson


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

It's my pleasure to bring a new episode of our "In The Spotlight at Carpe Diem" feature. Last week I introduced to you Robert Gibson a.k.a. Ubugu and today I love to introduce to you another great haiku poetess who shares her haiku through the mail with us.

For starters I love to share a haiga created by Joyce inspired on "puddles" after that Joyce will tell you something about herself.

© haiku by Joyce Lorenson
This is what Joyce tells about herself:


[...] "I was born in 1944 in Rhode Island, U.S.A., and lived my first years on my grandfather's dairy farm by the sea, where my father and grandfather were fishermen and farmers. My childhood was spent working with my parents and brothers on our farms, a wonderful time so in tune with nature.
I grew up in the company of cows, surrounded by a river, a pond, fields, orchards and woods, and all the animals and birds that are part of that landscape. My entire life has been spent here in New England not far from where I was born. At age twelve I was introduced to poetry at school and was smitten. I decided I wanted to be a poet, but sadly I felt I had no ability and abandoned the idea.

Around that time I also discovered the culture of Japan and became enamored of all things Japanese. Upon graduating high school, I soon married and had a family, years later I became a florist, never losing my love of poetry, but not writing. 

Joyce Lorenson (2016)

Five years ago I decided it was now or never, I had to give writing a go. After writing several traditional free verse poems, I began to feel a shorter form would suit me better. Having always loved haiku, a year ago I thought I would try my hand at it and found it very enjoyable, but challenging, which also suits me.

I continually strive to improve my haiku. I have been very lucky to have had several poems published, a long awaited dream come true, as well as my dream of visiting Japan, which I did twice. I also paint, make botanical prints, and am a bird and nature watcher as I still live in a rural area." [...]


A wonderful biography in which we already read that Joyce is close to nature ... haiku has done it again ... haiku found another 'real' haiku poet living close to nature and with nature. As you have read above Joyce was already in love with nature on a young age and I am glad that she granted me also permission to use a childhood photo of her.

Joyce already studying nature on my grandfather's farm
I am honored that Joyce would participate in this new feature at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. I have several haiku written by her inspired on our prompts which I love to share here too.

Magnolia:

magnolia blossoms
their lemony fragrance
lifting my spirits

lake:

lights along the shore
shimmering reflections
ripple in the lake

glowing in the dark
friendly lights
far side of the lake

inspired on Sara's kikobun:

dappled summer morning

picking silver blushed berries
tongues dyed indigo *



*This is taken from a poem I wrote about going blueberrying as a child.


haiga muddy road by Joyce Lorenson
A kikobun:

Nestled below Kamakura hills we descended down the path to visit the temple complex. It was a warm, sunny day with the scents of spring and bird song. The history and architecture filled us with awe and respect. After strolling about the grounds, we left, climbing the uphill path in contemplation when suddenly the stillness was broken by a loud blast of noise. We turned, looking back and down into the valley, and witnessed a chain of saffron robed monks walking in a procession from the temple, their leader blowing on a conch shell horn, a very Zen moment.

conch shell blast
quaking leaves
in the vacillating air

ginkgo:

an ancient gingko
girdled with a shimenawa
prayers of pilgrims

rain: 

unexpected rain
on the Kamakura station platform
a man selling umbrella


spatter of rain
on our umbrella
counting koi

waking to rain
in a lamp lit puddle
swirling leaves


haiga "prayers for rain" by Joyce Lorenson

falling leaves:

leaves sailing
in a whirl of wind
our separate lives

pagoda:

emerging from a cloud
of cherry blossoms
five storied pagoda

birds miss the point
piercing the sky
pagoda at Kan'ei-ji

I think you all think the same about Joyce her haiku and haiga. Joyce is a very gifted haiku poetess and I am so proud that I had the honor to create this "In The Spotlight" episode about her.

Do you know a haiku poet / ess without a weblog or website who loves to be published online here at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai? Please let me know through an email to our emailaddress: carpediemhaikukai@gmail.com

I am looking forward to your responses. As you know there is no linking possibility for this special feature, but you can respond through the comment-field.