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Showing posts with label silence. Show all posts
Showing posts with label silence. Show all posts
Tuesday, June 25, 2019
Carpe Diem #1688 Troiku Month (17) Breathing Silence
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new episode of our Troiku Month. Sorry for being late, but I had a busy evening at work, so my excuses for that.
I will give you only the haiku to work with and I hope you are all inspired to create a Troiku with it. Here is the haiku to work with:
alone on the beach
only the cries of seaguls -
breathing silence
© Chèvrefeuille
It's one of my submissions for the silence retreat back in 2016.
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until July 1st at noon (CEST). I will try to publish our new episode later on.
Sunday, March 11, 2018
Carpe Diem #1386 Silence ...
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Well ... here it is the first episode of our new theme for this month "Rumi, the mystical poet" and I hope you all will appreciate this change of theme and of course I hope that this change of theme will bring back the responses and joy to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. By the way, I hope you had a wonderful weekend. Mom is home again, but she still needs a lot of care, so we have arranged that she has a "private" nurse 4 times a day.
The first poem I love to share here with you all is titled "two days of silence", but first I will tell you a little bit more about Rumi, the mystical poet.
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| Rumi |
Rumi was born in Balkh, a small town west of Mazar-i-Sharif in Afghanistan on September 30, 1207. Fleeing the approach of Genghis Khan’s Mongol armies, the family moved several times, to Waksh in what is now Tajikistan, to Samarkand, to Damascus, finally settling in Konya on the high plain of central Anatolia. Rumi’s father, Bahauddin, was a highly original mystic who kept his intimations of, and promptings from, the divine in diary form. The Ma’arif was one of Rumi’s most treasured texts after Bahauddin’s death. He studied it with his father’s former student, Burhanuddin Mahaqqiq. They also read Sanai and Attar together, and Burhan led the young Rumi on several consecutive chillas, forty-day fasting retreats. Burhan was himself an eccentric hermit majestically unconcerned with beliefs and lineages. He seems to have prepared Jelaluddin well for the galvanizing event of the young mystic’s life, his meeting with Shamsi Tabriz.
In late October of 1244 Rumi was thirty-seven. Shams was twenty, maybe thirty, years older. Their meeting and subsequent sohbet (mystical conversation) generated fresh stories and ecstatic icons for the world of mystical awareness and love. Their Friendship is one of the great mysteries. Rumi’s poetry is heard as continuing resonance from That. Their separation on the physical plane occurred four years later on December 5, 1248. There is disagreement now as to how Shams disappeared. Franklin Lewis claims that the rumor Shams was murdered by jealous disciples of Rumi “arrives late, circulates in oral context, and is almost certainly groundless.” What we know for sure is what we have, the poems so filled with grief and ecstatic sentience. All the biographical scenarios, whichever one chooses, are without sufficient evidence to be authoritative. No matter. We can let that detective story rest awhile. We have the Shams, the Masnavi, the letters, Discourses, sermons, the Rubaiyat, a generous plenty!
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| The Spiritual Master of Rumi |
After Shams’s death or disappearance, Rumi lived twenty-six years tending soul growth in the dervish community around him and leaving us a prodigious legacy. He spoke the poetry spontaneously. It was taken down by scribes, and he revised it later in manuscript. Rumi was married twice; his first wife, Gowhar Khatun, died young. She bore two children, Sultan Velad and Allaedin. Rumi had two children also with his second wife, Kira Khatun: Mozaffer, a son, and Maleke, a daughter.
The central enigma of Rumi’s life, of course, is Shams Tabriz, the electrifying, eccentric wanderer with the charisma of a desert wind, who knelt and prayed for a companion on his own level of attainment. A voice came, What will you give? “My head.” Jelaluddin of Konya is your Friend. He said later that he came to Rumi when Rumi was ready to receive his secret. But it was observed of Rumi and Shams that one could not tell who was the teacher and who the disciple.
Thoreau went to the woods to simplify and find what was most deeply his. “I did not want to live what was not life. Living is so dear.” Some sentences sear the soul free of communal and personal habits, the situation we’re born within. When Shams pushes Rumi’s books into the fountain at their first meeting, including his father Bahauddin’s soul notes, he says, “Now you must live what you’ve been reading and talking about.”
Rumi relinquishes his books, and he and Shams go into retreat. Rumi asks for burning. Shams says, I am fire. It is that which refines the poems to their daring intensity and courage, to their setting out into unknown regions, these heart-quadrants that are so subtle and multivalent.
Why should I seek more?
I am the same as he.
His essence speaks through me.
I have been looking for myself.
After this soul-merging with Shams, Rumi found another living friend with whom to do the heart-opening work, Saladin Zarkub the goldsmith. Saladin was an old man (the poems become more quiet and tender), and after Saladin’s death, Husam Chelebi, Rumi’s scribe, became the friend of his heart. They produced the six books of the Masnavi. Rumi died as the sky turned deep red at sunset on December 17, 1273. There were minor tremors, like stomach grumblings. “Patience, old earth!” Rumi called out. “You’ll have your sweet morsel soon!”
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| Silence |
Two Days of Silence
After days of feasting, fast.
After days of sleeping, stay awake
one night. After these times of bitter
storytelling, joking, and serious
considerations, we should give ourselves
two days between layers of baklava
in the quiet seclusion where soul sweetens
and thrives more than with language.
© Rumi (taken from The Book of Love)
Let is take a closer look at this beauty. In this poem we see the love for our own body "after days of feasting, fast" "after days of sleeping, stay awake". We need our rest of course, but it is also very wonderful to stay awake several days after each other, because that will bring your soul in to ecstasy and will give you a feeling of enlightenment and it will open the source for your inspiration. Quiet seclusion will sweeten your soul and will open your heart to the silence.
early rising
bathing in the silence of the garden
birds praise their Creator
bathing in the silence of the garden
birds praise their Creator
© Chèvrefeuille
Try to create a haiku or tanka (or other Japanese poetry form) in which you don't really use the word silence ... let the scene speak to your reader about silence. Enjoy it!
This episode is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until March 18th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our new episode, another beautiful poem by Rumi, later on. Have fun!
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
haiku,
Persian poetry,
Rumi the Mystical Poet,
silence,
spirituality,
tanka
Location:
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Sunday, January 29, 2017
Carpe Diem #1139 listening
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Yesterday I promised you to publish the first prompts of February, but I have to say I am sorry I hadn't time to start creating the new prompt-list, but I have created our new logo for February already. I will share that new logo at the end of this episode.
We are on our way to Santiago De Compostela and we reached the end of this pilgrimage almost, but before we enter Santiago De Compostela there was another thing Paulo had to learn. About that is this new episode. First I thought to title this episode "silence", which also had fit the entire episode, but finally, just seconds ago, I decided to title this episode "listening".
Listening is a gift not everyone can listen, not everyone can be that listener that can and will help you to solve your problems or give answers on your questions. It is something like ... "sorry I didn't understand your problem". To help an other being in need you have to understand what the other asks you or from you, without understanding you cannot respond in the correct way. Let me try to re-form that response that used above. "I see what you mean, what can I do for you?" Isn't that incredible? Just rephrasing the response shows that you have listened, really listened, to what the other said.
The above picture shows you the Radiotelescope of Dwingeloo, a small village in my country. A radiotelescope is ... a big ear ... that listens to the sounds from the Cosmos, the stars, it's always on it always listens to the sounds of the stars and the cosmos ... that's what listening is. You have to be prepared to listen always to the sounds, the feelings, the emotions, the words and more from those around you. If you are a good listener than you are a blessed being, because it's not meant for every one to be a good listener.
I love to share a quote from "The Pilgrimage" about listening:
[...] ‘We are not smart enough to be able to listen to the silence! We are just human beings, and we don’t even know how to listen to our own ramblings. You have never asked me how I knew that Legion was about to arrive. Now I will tell you how: by listening. The sound began many days before, when we were still in Astorga. Starting then, I began to move along more quickly, because all the indications were that we were going to meet up with him in Foncebadon. You heard the same sound as I, but you were not listening.
‘Everything is contained in sounds – the past, the present, and the future. The person who does not know how to listen will never hear the advice that life offers us all the time. And only the person who listens to the sounds of the moment is able to make the right decisions.’ [...] (Source: The Pilgrimage by Paulo Coelho)
Petrus, Paulo's guide, asks him to sat down and than told him about the "Listening Exercise":
[...] 'Relax. Close your eyes. Try for several minutes to concentrate on all of the sounds you hear in your surroundings, as if you were hearing an orchestra playing its instruments. Little by little, try to separate each sound from the others. Concentrate on each one, as if it were the only instrument playing. Try to eliminate the other sounds from your awareness.
When you do this exercise every day, you will begin to hear voices. First, you will think that they
are imaginary. Later, you will discover that they are voices of people from your past, present, and future, all of them participating with you in the remembrance of time.
This exercise should be performed only when you already know the voice of your messenger.
Do this exercise for ten minutes at a time. " [...] (Source: The Pilgrimage by Paulo Coelho)
You just have to try it to experience it, and I think it's not really necessary to know the voice of your messenger, your guardian angel. It's like listening to the wind, close your eyes, experience the spring breeze, you can feel it on your face, you can feel it playing with your hair ... the spring breeze (by the way all kind of wind) whispers his/her message in your ear. You can listen what the wind does tell you, it is the word of the Creator, Higher Self or what ever name you will give it.
Listening ... well I don't know if I am a good listener, but for sure I will try to be a good listener worth to have given that gift ... the gift of listening.
Yesterday I promised you to publish the first prompts of February, but I have to say I am sorry I hadn't time to start creating the new prompt-list, but I have created our new logo for February already. I will share that new logo at the end of this episode.
We are on our way to Santiago De Compostela and we reached the end of this pilgrimage almost, but before we enter Santiago De Compostela there was another thing Paulo had to learn. About that is this new episode. First I thought to title this episode "silence", which also had fit the entire episode, but finally, just seconds ago, I decided to title this episode "listening".
Listening is a gift not everyone can listen, not everyone can be that listener that can and will help you to solve your problems or give answers on your questions. It is something like ... "sorry I didn't understand your problem". To help an other being in need you have to understand what the other asks you or from you, without understanding you cannot respond in the correct way. Let me try to re-form that response that used above. "I see what you mean, what can I do for you?" Isn't that incredible? Just rephrasing the response shows that you have listened, really listened, to what the other said.
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| Radiotelescope Dwingeloo (The Netherlands) (Dutch website) |
I love to share a quote from "The Pilgrimage" about listening:
[...] ‘We are not smart enough to be able to listen to the silence! We are just human beings, and we don’t even know how to listen to our own ramblings. You have never asked me how I knew that Legion was about to arrive. Now I will tell you how: by listening. The sound began many days before, when we were still in Astorga. Starting then, I began to move along more quickly, because all the indications were that we were going to meet up with him in Foncebadon. You heard the same sound as I, but you were not listening.
‘Everything is contained in sounds – the past, the present, and the future. The person who does not know how to listen will never hear the advice that life offers us all the time. And only the person who listens to the sounds of the moment is able to make the right decisions.’ [...] (Source: The Pilgrimage by Paulo Coelho)
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| Listen to the sound of the wind it will reveal you the sacred wisdom of the Road to Santiago |
[...] 'Relax. Close your eyes. Try for several minutes to concentrate on all of the sounds you hear in your surroundings, as if you were hearing an orchestra playing its instruments. Little by little, try to separate each sound from the others. Concentrate on each one, as if it were the only instrument playing. Try to eliminate the other sounds from your awareness.
When you do this exercise every day, you will begin to hear voices. First, you will think that they
are imaginary. Later, you will discover that they are voices of people from your past, present, and future, all of them participating with you in the remembrance of time.
This exercise should be performed only when you already know the voice of your messenger.
Do this exercise for ten minutes at a time. " [...] (Source: The Pilgrimage by Paulo Coelho)
You just have to try it to experience it, and I think it's not really necessary to know the voice of your messenger, your guardian angel. It's like listening to the wind, close your eyes, experience the spring breeze, you can feel it on your face, you can feel it playing with your hair ... the spring breeze (by the way all kind of wind) whispers his/her message in your ear. You can listen what the wind does tell you, it is the word of the Creator, Higher Self or what ever name you will give it.
Listening ... well I don't know if I am a good listener, but for sure I will try to be a good listener worth to have given that gift ... the gift of listening.
alone
only the spring breeze
listen
© Chèvrefeuille
Another one:
along the Road
only the sound of nature to enjoy
listen just listen
© Chèvrefeuille
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| Our new logo for February 2017 |
And a last one from my archives which I published in response on our Winter Retreat last winter:
rustling leaves
telling stories from all over the world
the silence deepens
© Chèvrefeuille
Well ... I hope I have inspired you again with this post. This post is NOW OPEN for your submissions and will remain open until February 3rd at noon (CET). Have fun!
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
haiku,
listening,
Paulo Coelho,
Pilgrimage,
Santiago De Compostela,
silence,
spirituality,
tanka
Location:
Netherlands
Sunday, August 24, 2014
Carpe Diem #546, Silence
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
the silence deepens
as the night falls like a blanket
upon a white world
© Chèvrefeuille
Just an impromptu-verse which found me as I started to prepare this episode of our daily haiku-meme. It's a haiku straight from the heart ... and it's about late autumn or winter. Why a winter haiku came up? I don't know. It's still summer here in The Netherlands, but it feels like autumn ... a lot of wind and rain and we even have had the heater on a few days ago. It felt cold and moist inside our home, because of all the rain we have had.
The haiku above was maybe triggered by our prompt for today, silence, based on Khalil's "Sand and Foam". He has a few beautiful 'verses' about silence and they will inspire you I think. Here they are:
[...] "A great singer is he who sings our silences". [...]
[...] "I have
learned silence from the talkative, toleration from the intolerant, and
kindness from the unkind; yet strange, I am ungrateful to these teachers". [...]
[...] "The silence
of the envious is too noisy". [...]
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| Credits: Silence |
How would you describe silence?
the babbling brook
makes me drowsy and happy -
a late summer night
© Chèvrefeuille
Well ... let the silence of your soul inspire you to write wonderful, silent haiku.
This episode will be open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until August 27th at noon (CET). I will try to publish our new episode, flame, later on.
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
haiku,
Khalil Gibran,
Sand and Foam,
silence
Location:
Nederland
Wednesday, May 15, 2013
Carpe Diem's Oasis (May 2013)
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
A new feature? Maybe, maybe not? Carpe Diem's Oasis is just a place to sit down and lean back, seeking the silence within. Just a place for contemplation, let your thoughts flow, maybe you will find that special spot, that special haiku, where your deeper and secret desires are hiding. Let us say: 'The place where our Inner Self rests 'til it's awakened'.
in deep silence
thoughts tumbling through my mind
awakening
An oasis in the middle of the desert, a place where someone, you and I, can rest for a while after a busy day or a long journey (such like the journey we are in the middle of, the Tarot). We can eat, drink, sleep and be silent enjoying the eachother's companionship or the bedouin, the camels, the palmtrees, the sun, the moon and the stars. In a short line: Be one with the Universe.
| Source: Bedouin Tent |
one with the Cosmos
laying down in the sand, listening,
to my heartbeat
We need the silence, our world is to loud to be one with the Universe. Give your mind freedom, let flow the thoughts, ideas and find your creativity and inspiration in that silence.
I hope that Carpe Diem's Oasis can be that place to become one with the Universe. No prompts, just an open space to let flow your creativity and inspiration. Just you, I and the haiku we are all in love with (smiles). Let the stream of inspiration flow. Let your thoughts free and share your haiku or senryu, tanka, kyoka, haibun or haiga.
I will post every month, around the 15th, a Carpe Diem's Oasis episode for pleasure and inspirational silence, Inner peace and everlasting freedom for your thoughts, your deeper source of wisdom, knowledge, love, peace and so on. No limitations, no rules, just freedom of thought to activate your haiku heart.
Don't be afraid or shy, just compose haiku and share them in our Oasis, a place where you can be alone with your thoughts. A place to explore the well of creativity and inspiration deep within you.
deep down inside
hiding in the deeper layers of the soul
divine inspiration
This Carpe Diem's Oasis will stay open 'til June 15th 11.59 AM (CET) and later on that day I will publish our new Carpe Diem's Oasis episode. Just let flow your inspiration without the 'must' of a prompt, maybe try some new haiku forms, or maybe you have written a haiku which you think it needs an upgrade or something.
Labels:
Carpe Diem Oasis,
creativity,
discovering,
exploring,
haiku,
inspiration,
no prompts,
silence
Location:
Nederland
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