Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Credits: Crystal cobweb |
morning dews
coming out a cedar house
the whole forest
© Jane Reichhold
And here is a cascading haiku which I have written somewhere in October 2012 ... not specific for autumn, but I like to share it again here:
dewdrops shimmer
in the flower of the Morning Glory
a diamond necklace
a diamond
necklace
evaporates in the warmth of the sun
that's transience
that's
transienceevaporates in the warmth of the sun
that's transience
mysterious early morning water
dewdrops shimmer
© Chèvrefeuille
Dew on Morning Glory |
Troiku is a haiku-form which I have created sveral years ago and it looks similar with the Russian Troika, a three horse sleigh. The Sleigh is a haiku and with every line of that haiku, a new haiku starts as being the three horses of the Troika ... so that explains why I have called it Troiku. By the way ... a troiku is only possible in the non-classical way of haiku writing.
the pumpkins look cool
flecked with mud
from the morning dew
1: the
pumpkins look cool
almost humanlike -
all souls night
almost humanlike -
all souls night
2: flecked
with mud
the white chrysanthemums
after the storm
the white chrysanthemums
after the storm
3: from the
morning dew
Monarch butterfly drinks to life -
sound of funeral bells
Monarch butterfly drinks to life -
sound of funeral bells
© Chèvrefeuille
Monarch Butterfly |
This episode will be open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until September 14th at noon (CET). I will post our next episode, deserted beach, later on.
So many wonderful haiku you've shared with us here -- a remarkable post, Kristjaan! :)
ReplyDeleteI liked this form the first time I discovered it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing it again.