Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at this penultimate episode of Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month. Today I have a nice "hokku" written by one of our family members, Paloma. So we have a nice modern "hokku" to "play with".
Here is Paloma's "hokku", she wrote this one in December 2013:
Rumbling winter storm –
Ents are dancing with their wives –
ancient limbs entwined
© Paloma
I hadn't time enough to create a second stanza, but maybe I will come up with something later today.
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| Ent (figure from Tolkien's Lord of the Rings) by Mazagro-Art |
This episode is open for your submissions tonight at 7.00 PM (CET) and will remain open until June 3rd at noon (CET). I will publish our last "hokku" on our Twitter account.
You really chose great haoku this month, to serve as hokku. The mix of classical and colleagues was so well- balanced and generous.
ReplyDeleteTan Renga Challenge May 30:
ReplyDeleterumbling winter storm
Ents are dancing with their wives-
ancient limbs entwined Paloma
in the wake of wild fires
the black burned out souls of trees Joyce Lorenson