Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
It's time again for a time challenging Time Glass feature in which the goal is to write/compose a haiku within 24 hours and today I have made this challenge a little bit more difficult, because I love to challenge you all to write a haibun with the given prompt and the inspiring image.
Impression of Waterlilies |
the old pond
a frog jumps into it
the sound of water
(C) Basho (tr. Chèvrefeuille)
Back to the task. Maybe you can remember our Kamishibai Extreme challenge (2014-November). In which I challenged you to write a haibun (prose and haiku) on a given prompt with only 55 words (including the haiku). For this Time Glass episode I will challenge you again to write a haibun, with only 75 words, including the haiku, in just 24 hours.
hides a little green frog
for the blue heron
©
Chèvrefeuille
against his
nature,a frog in front of the fireplace -
the cry of a stork
© Yozakura
in deep
silenceSaburo is walking the path -
a frog jumps away
© Chèvrefeuille
the little child
reaches for the water lilies
without seeing the frog
(c)
Chèvrefeuille
I didn't see the 75 word limit until after I wrote my piece.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy it anyway.
Ha! I managed 75 words exactly! Bring it on!
ReplyDeleteHmmmmmmmm...my illustrious colleagues...I am not claiming to write haibun well but it is my favourite art form, and I just need to say, in a haibun the haiku is not there to explain or condense the prose. Have a glance at Basho or Kerouac, and others. It does not take away from the quality of your writing, but it is nice to see some kind of relationship between prose and haiku, not just echo.
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