Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Welcome at a new episode of our weekly special Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge. In this feature the goal is to add the second stanza (of two lines) towards a given "hokku". This week I have chosen to challenge you with a haiku by the Lithuanian haiku poetess Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė, as introduced in our Europe Ginko stage Lithuania.
by the
mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words
we talk about the same things
just in other words
© Goda
Virginija Bendoraitienė
And now it is up to you to create the second stanza through association on images in this "hokku". Mountain Spring |
Here is my attempt:
by the
mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words © Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė
we talk about the same things
just in other words © Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė
the summer breeze whispers
through the willow leaves © Chèvrefeuille
This Tan Renga Challenge is open for your submissions at noon (CET) and will remain open until next Friday July 1st at noon (CET). Have fun!
Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge # 104:
ReplyDeleteby the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words Goda Virginija Bendoraitiene
love has a language
all it's own Joyce Lorenson
ReplyDeleteby the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words
the droplets of the waterfall
cool the summer heat of day
Valentina Ranaldi-Adams