Friday, June 24, 2016

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #104 "by the mountain spring" by Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Welcome at a new episode of our weekly special Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge. In this feature the goal is to add the second stanza (of two lines) towards a given "hokku". This week I have chosen to challenge you with a haiku by the Lithuanian haiku poetess Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė, as introduced in our Europe Ginko stage Lithuania.

by the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words
© Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė
And now it is up to you to create the second stanza through association on images in this "hokku".


Mountain Spring

Here is my attempt:


by the mountain spring
we talk about the same things
just in other words 
                           
© Goda Virginija Bendoraitienė

the summer breeze whispers
through the willow leaves
                  © Chèvrefeuille

This Tan Renga Challenge is open for your submissions at noon (CET) and will remain open until next Friday July 1st at noon (CET). Have fun!

2 comments:

  1. Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge # 104:

    by the mountain spring
    we talk about the same things
    just in other words Goda Virginija Bendoraitiene

    love has a language
    all it's own Joyce Lorenson

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  2. by the mountain spring
    we talk about the same things
    just in other words

    the droplets of the waterfall
    cool the summer heat of day

    Valentina Ranaldi-Adams

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