Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
It's my pleasure to start with our Third Renga Party "Summer Moonlight". This Renga Party has 10 participants and the "hokku" is written by Dolores Fegan.
This Renga Party we are creating a traditional "summer" kasen-renga of 36 links. You have to try to respond within 24 hours by writing your link (stanza) in the comment field. As you have written your comment please ask in your comment your successor to write his / her link by "saying": Your turn (name of successor).
Between [ ] you find how much lines you have to write and which "theme" you have to use.
Some of you have to write two links on a row, because of a "turn" in the kasen-renga. The following participants have to write two links on a row: Candy, Kim M. Russell and Nimi Arora.
I hope that this Renga Party will be a success. Have fun!
Summer Moonlight |
SUMMER MOONLIGHT
A Traditional Summer
Kasen Renga
Started - Finished:
June 27th
Written by / between: Dolores Fegan (DF); Joyce
Lorenson (JL); Rallentanda (Ra); Kyle TM (KTM); Christy Draper (CD); Candy
(Ca); Kim M. Russell (KMR); Nimi Arora (NA); Humbird (Hu) and Chèvrefeuille
(Ch)
[SU = summer; A = autumn; W = winter; SP =
spring; Misc. = non-seasonal references -- usually about people or feelings or
places; Love = well you can decide... Moons are always autumn unless you name
it a summer or winter or spring moon]
Here is the line-up for this Renga Party:
HOKKU:
1. summer
moonlight
steals my sleep again
I stroll down the lane (DF)
steals my sleep again
I stroll down the lane (DF)
2.[2] [SU]
Joyce Lorenson
3.[3] [Misc.] Rallentanda
4.[2] [Misc.] Kyle TM
5.[3] [MOON / A] Christy Draper
6.[2] [A] [also write link #7] Candy
7.[3][A] Candy
8.[2] [Misc. / Love] Kim M. Russell
9.[3][Misc. / Love] Nimi Arora
10.[2][Misc. / Love] Humbird
11.[3] [Misc.] Chèvrefeuille
12.[2] [Misc.] Dolores Fegan
13.[3] [MOON / W] Joyce Lorenson
14.[2] [W] Rallentanda
15.[3] [Misc.] Kyle TM
16.[2] [Misc.] Christy Draper
17.[3] [FLOWER / SP] Candy
18.[2] [SP] [also write link #19] Kim M. Russell
19.[3] [SP] Kim M. Russell
20.[2] [Misc.] Nimi Arora
21.[3] [Misc.] Humbird
22.[2] [Misc.] Chèvrefeuille
23.[3] [SU] Dolores Fegan
24.[2] [SU] Joyce Lorenson
25.[3] [Misc. / Love] Rallentanda
26.[2] [Misc./ Love] Kyle TM
27.[3] [Misc./ Love] Christy Draper
28.[2] [Misc.] Candy
29.[3] [MOON / A] Kim. M. Russell
30.[2] [A] [also write link #31] Nimi Arora
31.[3] [A] Nimi Arora
32.[2] [Misc.] Humbird
33.[3] [Misc.] Chèvrefeuille
34.[2] [Misc. / SP] Dolores Fegan
35.[3] [FLOWER / SP] Joyce Lorenson
36.[2] [SP] Rallentanda (ageku or closing verse to connect the end with the start, like a chain)
I am looking forward to your creative links .... have fun!3.[3] [Misc.] Rallentanda
4.[2] [Misc.] Kyle TM
5.[3] [MOON / A] Christy Draper
6.[2] [A] [also write link #7] Candy
7.[3][A] Candy
8.[2] [Misc. / Love] Kim M. Russell
9.[3][Misc. / Love] Nimi Arora
10.[2][Misc. / Love] Humbird
11.[3] [Misc.] Chèvrefeuille
12.[2] [Misc.] Dolores Fegan
13.[3] [MOON / W] Joyce Lorenson
14.[2] [W] Rallentanda
15.[3] [Misc.] Kyle TM
16.[2] [Misc.] Christy Draper
17.[3] [FLOWER / SP] Candy
18.[2] [SP] [also write link #19] Kim M. Russell
19.[3] [SP] Kim M. Russell
20.[2] [Misc.] Nimi Arora
21.[3] [Misc.] Humbird
22.[2] [Misc.] Chèvrefeuille
23.[3] [SU] Dolores Fegan
24.[2] [SU] Joyce Lorenson
25.[3] [Misc. / Love] Rallentanda
26.[2] [Misc./ Love] Kyle TM
27.[3] [Misc./ Love] Christy Draper
28.[2] [Misc.] Candy
29.[3] [MOON / A] Kim. M. Russell
30.[2] [A] [also write link #31] Nimi Arora
31.[3] [A] Nimi Arora
32.[2] [Misc.] Humbird
33.[3] [Misc.] Chèvrefeuille
34.[2] [Misc. / SP] Dolores Fegan
35.[3] [FLOWER / SP] Joyce Lorenson
36.[2] [SP] Rallentanda (ageku or closing verse to connect the end with the start, like a chain)
Namaste,
Chèvrefeuille, your host
summer moonlight
ReplyDeletesteals my sleep again
I stroll down the lane
© Dolores (hokku)
Your turn Joyce
the sound of the scythe
ReplyDeleteacross golden fields
Joyce
Your turn Rallentanda
i feel a presence
ReplyDeletea light breeze sighs through the trees
goosebumps and tingles
Your turn Kyle
wrapped in a parka
ReplyDeletecold wind rattles the windows
the yard covered in frost
Your turn Kyle
you take my hand
ReplyDeletei've waited so long for you
my heart skips a beat
Your turn Kyle
i stroll down the lane
ReplyDeletethe bright moon winking at me
an owl rustles leaves
Hi Rall,
ReplyDeleteWhich stanza you wish to be used. You gave 4 possibilities?
Kristjaan
These are my four entries for the whole thing
Delete3.
i feel a presence
a light breeze sighs through the trees
goosebumps and tingles
14
wrapped in a parka
cold wind rattles the windows
the yard covered in frost
25
you take my hand
i've waited so long for you
my heart skips a beat
36
i stroll down the lane
the bright moon winking at me
an owl rustles leaves
I have done all of mine because the time zoning is difficult for me. It is already the 27th here... so if you could put them in the right sequence for me it would be good. Thanks.
Okay i will place them in line. The renga-party has just started and about a month it will be ready.
Deletea memory walks
ReplyDeletebrushing my fingers
your turn Christy
Rustling of leaves
ReplyDeleteI hold up my paper moon
Only crickets call
Your turn Candy for #6 & 7
their chirps a lonely sound
ReplyDeleteon this long night
autumn rain
falls gently on the path
lanterns glow
over to you Kim
a cloud of insects gathers
ReplyDeleteto embrace the light
So sorry, Nimi. I forgot to say over to you!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kim
ReplyDeletesoothing light flickers afar
the couple share their warmth
You are up next, Humbird
Hi Nimi, could you write one more line (you have 3 first time) before I add my 2? Ths. :)
ReplyDeletenight show
ReplyDeleteloud applauses - mosquitoes
dances to dawn
Your turn, Chevrefeuille
babbling brook
ReplyDeleteI sit in silence, I bow my head
one with nature
Your turn Dolores
a small leaf vessel
ReplyDeletesails quickly by
your turn Joyce
a scrap of moon
ReplyDeletethrough snowy boughs
patching an old quilt
Your turn, Rallentanda...almost forgot to say it!
ReplyDeleteIn name of Rallentanda:
ReplyDeletewrapped in a parka
cold wind rattles the windows
the yard covered in frost
Your turn Kyle
flame dances
ReplyDeletewarming rocks in time
to icy chatter
you're up, Christy
Sorry, I have been traveling, I will get my two lines posted tonight.
ReplyDeletePuppet shadows in the trees
ReplyDeleteBeyond the night stars twinkle
Your turn Candy
....... and it's your turn Kim :-)
ReplyDeletebright moon shines through
ReplyDeletebranches of old apple tree
blossoms sparkle
--
sorry, for some reason this didn't post when I tried yesterday
Now it's Kim's turn :-)
Sorry, Candy, but I can't see your haiku/link.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Candy :)
ReplyDeleteslivers of silvery light
slip between fresh foliage
nesting blackbirds sing
sweet liquid notes, a prelude
to dawn of new day
Over to you Nimi!
I got my calculations wrong. Just saw that I'm very late. Will post in a couple of hours. Sorry!
ReplyDeletedawn chorus echoes
ReplyDeletethe glimpse of first light
Over to you, Humbird
filigree earrings
ReplyDeletedawn dew spangled a pine tree
tremble in ecstasy
Your turn, Kristjaan
leaving the beach at sunrise
ReplyDeletesand on our backs and buttocks
Your turn Dolores
heat lightening flashes
ReplyDeleteacross the evening sky
illuminating
Oops! Your turn Joyce.
ReplyDeletesway of the porch swing
ReplyDeletemoving through summer heat
your turn, Rallentanda
In name of Rallentanda:
ReplyDeleteyou take my hand
i've waited so long for you
my heart skips a beat
Your turn Kyle
in the space between
ReplyDeleteyour breath
your turn Christy
As lips part
ReplyDeleteIn sweet anticipation
Time stands still
It's your turn Candy
sweet jasmine fills the air
ReplyDeleteeven the birds are silent
~
your turn Kim
Thank you Candy
ReplyDeletethe moon is unleashed,
a white balloon wandering
a sky full of stars
And it's over to Nimi!
the slight chill I welcome
ReplyDeleteyour embrace warms me
swaying lightly
the music of crickets
a slight rustle
Over to you again, Humbird :)
every time I rely on
ReplyDeletethe falling star
Your turn, Kristjaan
moonlight dances
ReplyDeleteon the rolling surf
silverlight shines
Your turn Dolores
Sorry for delay -busy with grandchildren.
ReplyDeletesea turtle emerges
depositing eggs in sand
Your turn Joyce
sky blue
ReplyDeletetiny scilla bells
dangling
your turn Rallentanda
Rallentanda asked me to share her link with you all. This is the last haiku/link of this Renga Party, this is the ageku written by Rallentanda.
ReplyDeletei stroll down the lane
the bright moon winking at me
an owl rustles leaves
With this "ageku" this Renga is completed.
I realized to late that this "ageku" had to be two lines, so I have to re-do this "link". Give me some time to re-do it.
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